The Dark Side of the Rainbow

by Blue Tiger

7 - Bringing Rainbow Dash Back

Twilight flew back to the castle, where the others were still standing by tied-up Evil Rainbow Dash. She landed next to Rainbow and said, "I've found a spell to get her back!"

"Great!" A.J. said. "Now all ya have to do is do the spell!"

"NO!!" Rainbow said. "It's cool to be evil!"

"Well, too bad," Twilight said. She aimed her horn between Rainbow's eyes and did the spell. The book said that it was supposed to shoot out a small light blue beam, and that's what Twilight's horn shot out.

Rainbow opened her eyes a few seconds later. The creepypasta eyes turned back to her normal eyes. The color on her body returned to cyan and her mane and tail turned back to their normal rainbow color.

"Wha.... What happened?" She said. "Why am I all tied up?"

"Rainbow!" Scootaloo ran up to her sister and jumped on her and hugged her tight.

"Watch out, Scootaloo," Twilight said. When Scootaloo jumped off of Rainbow, Twilight did a spell to untie the ropes tied around Rainbow.

Rainbow stretched her legs and wings. "Why was I all tied up?" she repeated.

"It's a long story," Twilight said. "I'll tell you on the way back to your house."
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"I remember none of that!" Rainbow said when she and Twilight landed on her front porch.

"Well, it's all true," Twilight said. "And you know what else is true? You really did look like one of those creepypastas!"

"Ha! Yeah right," Rainbow said. "I'll see ya 'round, Twilight." She went inside her house.

"Yeah, see ya." Twilight headed back to the library.

Comments

[GoldenDashie]

Even dash was evil she is always cool

[Blue Tiger]

4688092 so what if the chapters are less than a thousand words

[Azure Ravenscroft]

4688190 It just makes it seem really rushed. You could've just put it up as one longer chapter, or added more detail in places

[KaBar42]

4688190

Because it's the quickest way to kill a story.

[nodamnbrakes]

Didn't do much for me. Sorry.

[Musical]

Had potential

[Blue Tiger]

well then I was right. this story is worse than my first one.

[Blue Tiger]

know what? I don't care if you guys hate this story. im keeping it.

[cringe]

A biiiittt rushed but...
FAVEEEE!!!!
BTW, yeah. I always used to get hater comments... i took off the story and put another the next thing you know, NOBODY comments. they were dark days...

YOU DESERVE MUSTACHE!!!

[Blue Tiger]

4805926 lol yah I think this might be one of my worst stories yet

[cringe]

4815906
Naw.

[Brody Deitrick]

bad.just just bad

[Void Streak]

the chapters need to be longer

[Rainbow sparkle1]

"NO!!" Rainbow said. "It's cool to be evil!"

Classic rainbow dash

This really does remind me of my beginner writer days because of the short chapters, but hey, it was decent no matter what, I just wish dash was bad longer than she was