Alex is down on his luck and wants nothing more than escape from his miserable life. He soon finds his chance after falling into a strange world that will either make or break him.
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ABoyNamedAlex
I'm full of ideas and this is one of my many outlets for these ideas.
ABoyNamedAlex
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You spelled Beginning wrong. The first chapter tile. Seriously?
35000+ words ... Umm... Ok. Wait wait.... Its complete!...
Okay... I think you just put this story out here fully done... Well then
4656917 he didn't ... He took his time but posted it all on one day
I'm not sure how I feel about this. I generally like it but the pacing feels like its on full afterburner. Everything moves and changes very quickly.
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Gruesome.
4657789 Every time a story begins with a variation of those words makes me feel like that inside every time.
Never trust a guy named Alex.
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Sounds painful.
4657801 Abso-fucking-lutely.
4657892 Awful bunch, the lot of them.
Ugh. Another LunaxHuman ship fic. Getting sick of seeing this shit. Especially if the romance is completely forced like in this story. She just SAW a weird goth-looking fag and starts blushing over it. Have a dislike for that horse shit alone, dude.
4657522 ok! Just didn't fully understand.
Well, I'll give you this, author. At least you completed the story and didn't puss out like a bitch like a lot of new folks do.
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You seem to be fond of that gif lately.
What exactly drove you to write and finish this shit sauce spewing machine that you call a "Story"? Going off of what Ozone said, its a HumanXLuna ship fic. That alone made me want to break your fucking head open and shove common sense into it. Even then, common sense probably runs from you while screaming-
"Help! I'm being chased by a shitty Human in Equestria Fic writer!"
Seriously, if you want to write a story that will get good reviews, try making a better plot and add some more detail. Don't just have Luna waltz in and see that Emo bastard named Alex and make her instantly want to fuck his brains out. Also, where the fuck was your head when you made that Luna Flavored Lollipop? Oh yeah, its shoved up Luna's ass.
How exactly did Luna make a Lollipop that tastes like her mouth? Or is it really her mouth you're tasting? You've got your head so far up that bitches anus that her ass fumes are probably like oxygen to you now.
I'm not going to read any further than that. But do you want to know what the worst part is? You made a fucking sequel to this. Why? What paranormal entity forced you to continue this shit storm, which now became a shit hurricane due to this "Sequel".
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm going to go play God of War III to release my aggression. I'll imagine Alex's face on Helios when I make Kratos rip his fucking head off.
Good day, sir.
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So glad I stopped going by Alex as a real life name. Instead, I'm a brony named Alexandria. Yeah, a brony named Alex who's a girl. Bet you didn't see that coming.
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But do you want to know what the worst part is? If you see his FanFiction.net account, he also has a third one.
Dude, what the hell is this?
Like, seriously. What were you thinking, posting this garbage? Are you proactively attempting to destroy any credibility you may have been able to acquire on this site? 'Cause if so, you're off to a damn good start.
Okay guys, I'm gonna set something straight that may explain a lot of stuff. This is not my story. This came from the sick and twisted mind of a friend who wished for me to finish this for him. He gives me the ideas, I make them into a story, and I get paid ten dollars a chapter, no matter how good or bad it is. Yes my spelling is bad, I fully understand that, the one thing I don't understand is this story. How he can come up with this? How many times has he bashed his head into a wall? What kind of drugs does it take to enjoy this? I'll never know. Like I said, I'm just the writer here. Either way, I hope to god this has answered some questions for you guys. Now if you will excuse me, I'm going to kill people in Far Cry 3. Good day.
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You sure about that, brosephski?
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And on your FanFiction.net account, especially on the description of "Back Story of Alexander..."
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This is a desperate excuse to save face if I've ever seen one
4661677 I get paid to do this dude, I don't even care.
4661692 Judging by your inability to tell a good story (or bullshit people), yeah, you really don't care.
4661697 exactly.
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4661749 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LuKzt7p-MnM
4661762 Except you clearly do.
4661767 And so what if i do care a little, what does it matter to you?
4661788 If you do care, then
A.) Don't bullshit me with how little you care.
B.) Actually put some effort into this story.
4661795 I said I only cared a little. Fine, I'll make a second version of the first chapter the way I would have written the story, since my friends ideas are obviously shit. I will personally send it to YOU and you can see if you like it or not. Happy?
4661822 I'd be happier if you went and did your entire story like that.
4661833 Okay, I'll get started on it. This time there will be less love, such a sickening emotion.
Sorry, this story is just not fun to read for me. I read it to chapter 5 and I had to kick my own ass to do so. I often complain about Stories how are too fast, but you got a new record on this one.
Alone in this 5 Chapters, he got send to Equestria, meeting the Princess, got send to Ponyville to help the Elements of Harmony, find a Magic Ring, becomes the guardian of this Ring and falls in Love with Luna.
And that all in 7449 words? Sorry, but that's not enough for me.
And that's why I give it a thumb down.
Huh, no comments?
Dont know if should give a thumbs up or down... :/
A bit interested what will happen woth Celly and Alex.
Oh wow that ending.
4661692 you should do it for the fun. Not for the money.
It has potential, but NEEDS editing. I would be glad to help, for free of course.
Well that was...fast
Ur O.C. is weak. Sorry!