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Through Derpy's Eyes: The Manticore Incident

The wall-eyed pegasus wakes from a deep, dreamless sleep one morning, and soon discovers that something is very wrong in Ponyville, and possibly Equestria at large. She also seems to be the only one who knows anything is wrong whatsoever.

Submission for EFNW '14's Iron Author Competition (Two hour writing limit) You are viewing an un-edited version. A revised and 'fleshed out' version may be added as another chapter eventually.

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Rayanne

Rayanne #1 · Dec 15th, 2014 · · ·

Well. That was a very random story especially that banana. I thought luna was about to tell her to put it in her ear

Hazard

Hazard #2 · Dec 21st, 2014 · · ·

5383926 To be fair, It was done for (my first ever) two hour challenge. Looking at it now, I see a ton of things I could change to improve it, but I feel like that would distort the essence of how it came to be.