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BronyDad


Loving husband and proud daddy of two girls

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Scootaloo has always wanted to fly more than anything else in the world. Now, she experiences the excitement of flight alongside her idol, Rainbow Dash

Coverart by DawnMistPony, who is an amazing artist. Check out her other work here!

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Comments ( 22 )

Aww how cute:rainbowkiss:

D'aw. :twilightsmile:

But, no seriously, this writing is pretty great. I've been meaning to get around to reading some of your stuff, and I'm really glad I started with this. :twilightsmile:

Aw shucks:ajsmug:

Thanks for the compliment, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy my other stuff as well.:pinkiesmile:

Mmm, waffles...

I could tell that it was a dream sequence pretty early on. Didn't lessen the impact of the heartwarming feeling, though. :scootangel:

This truly was an enjoyable read. Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile:

4744137 Thank you for the compliment and the favorite.:ajsmug: I'm glad you are enjoying my stories.

I like this fic a lot. Its sweet to see Rainbow's soft side. Keep writing wonderful stories like this one!!:twilightsmile:

4765238 Rainbow is a fantastic character to write, and I love love love writing her soft side.:rainbowkiss:

Keep writing wonderful stories like this one!

I promise to. I believe I owe it to my followers to pour all that I can into these stories.:twilightsheepish:

Don't forget, your flying lesson's at one o'clock sharp

4793455 how embarrassing..... Thank you for pointing that out! And for the favorite as well.:heart:

Now here's a touching little story. :moustache:

(but seriously, well written and I enjoyed it, will be reading more of yours as soon as time permits)

4898009 Awesome! I hope you enjoy them as well. :twilightsheepish:

Dem feels...

There's nothing else I can say. :raritycry:

Okay, so I'm going through The Hot Muffins and putting stories where they're supposed to go and I come across this. Loved it.

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I'm glad that you found it so enjoyable. It's also great to hear that the Hot Muffins is still going. I was wondering if it was a dead group there for a while. Since I now know it is alive and well, I'm gonna be adding more of my stories in the future. :yay:

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Yeah, it has been really silent. Even though I'm a Contributor I forgot I was one for a while, then there was a blog post from Pedro and I decided to burn through a few of the stories that were in the submissions box.

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Even though I'm a Contributor I forgot I was one for a while,

LOLZ!:rainbowlaugh: I understand, I'm pretty forgetful myself. But at least you went back and got busy. Good for you!:raritywink:

Your Trixie avatar is ridiculously adorable by the way. Thanks for reading!

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Another amazing story! Keep up the amazing work :twilightsmile:!
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I second the adorableness of Trixie :trixieshiftright:

I know it sounds a bit trite, but this read like it could be the kernel of an MLP episode. Apparently Lauren even had an early story arc similar to this initially sketched out. It unfortunately was dropped and never made it into production.

I honestly wish this was not a short one-shot. I would have loved to read a longer story that dealt with her disability head-on (most other stories I have seen conjure up some deus ex machina to get her to fly) and her coming to terms with the fact that she will never fly and finding her identity and worth in something other than "that crippled pegasus".

All in all, I loved this little slice of life.

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Apparently Lauren even had an early story arc similar to this initially sketched out. It unfortunately was dropped and never made it into production.

It may happen still. I'm going to guess that in the final season of the show the CMC will earn their cutie marks, and I think Scootaloo will get hers on the day she accepts that she will never fly. She can be everything she wants with that scooter of hers, she can be a daredevil just like Dash, and I'm sure that scooter will be her cutie mark.

As for your wishing that this was a longer fic.. I don't know when I'll get around to it, but I plan on writing a story featuring these two that will focus on Scoot's handicap. Thanks for reading and commenting!:twilightsmile:

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As for your wishing that this was a longer fic.. I don't know when I'll get around to it, but I plan on writing a story featuring these two that will focus on Scoot's handicap.

Certainly looking forward to it.
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This really needs a RD tag

Nice story.
I hope we see more of Scoot in this season:)

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