"The surest way to corrupt a youth is to instruct him to hold in higher esteem those who think alike than those who think differently." -Friedrich Nietzsche
Over 1,000 years ago, Luna and Celestia, the two regal pony sisters, were just fools to love.....at least, they believed it was love.
Celestia spent all of her time with the draconequus, Discord, while Luna spent all of her time with Sombra, the powerful king of the North. Both of them believed it was love, and neither expected it was betrayal.
Soon, both Celestia and Luna were puppets of evil. Though they didn't realize it, they were slowly being turned against each other, and their harmonious bond was being broken by the ones they believed understood them most.
Chapters (4)
I like the plot idea very much! The concept of Sombra working with Discord is intriquing and it's started off great! The way you use words is very clean and efficient; there aren't any trite, repetitive descriptions. Maybe next you can work in some more of the sisterly bond and what will be lost when they turn on each other. Also in the coming chapters you can add in some motives and make a little more personal connection between reader and character. Great job; I'm looking forward to more!
Alright...I'll bite.
Take a thumbs-up, I'll eagerly await more!
Hey you should update soon. . . hint hint wink wink.....
WAIT THATS IT NOOOO :((