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Spell 25
I write stories about the sexual experiences of small, multicolored equines. That's literally my contribution to the world.
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Well, that's the first of four.
Why is it that every time I write a story about Twilight, she ends up making out with herself? What the hell, brain?
P.S. - 'Murica.
A good story. I liked the alternate ending better than the first but both were good.
I was waiting for one of these fics to pop up. If I was half decent at clop I'd have had one out a week after the episode, but as I have no ability in the erotica department I had to leave it in the hands of others. You certainly delivered. I liked the first ending, but the "everything must be perfectly happy" side of me prefers the second one, even if the first one is the one I was hoping for from a story like this.
Its like 5-6k words of unending clop... I love it!
Nice, totally didn't see the subconscious suggestion thing coming. While the first ending seems borderline dark and isn't really my taste, the second ending is more to my liking. Regardless I enjoyed.
I need more subconscious suggestion Dash stories. Now that I think about it I'd be interested in reading a collection of silly things subconsciously suggested to Dash. Like a weeks worth. On Monday get milk for Twilight, cherries for Rarity, and flour for Pinkie, Speak in song on Tuesday. Wear Tank on your head all day Wednesday, Just don't use your wings on Thursday. Turn only left on Friday. Wear a fancy dress on Saturday. And replace the word "fine" with explode, -ed, -ing on Sunday.
I preferred the alternative ending here, because that first one is kind of dark. Doing that was pretty manipulative, and it could easily be abused. Rainbow Dash could be put in many situations alone from it. Plus, the "Joke's on you!" sort of thing was pretty funny.
As clops go, this is cloppy, so overall, brilliant. Great job!
'their hands groping each other.'
Anyway....
Enjoyable story, not really sure how i got here though.
I love the line
“I come from an hour in the future, and I promise you: You’re going to enjoy this.”
Good clop, greenthumbed
Oh my god this was great! the sex was hot and the ending was perfect! very well done sir!
The "all ponies must be happy" part of me really liked that you included that alternate ending. And this is probably the best TwiDash I've read in a few days, even if the "romance" is kinda one-sided (unless you include the alternate ending).
Kudos for writing a good TwiDash clop. You can colour me impressed!
The ending is kind of disturbing...
4643818 Because wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey.
Good story,I find it funny how Rainbow didn't put 2 and 2 together to find out Twilight was asking about her at the flashback
. Good story though 
This was my reaction to the finish 
. I loved it
Huh, somepony labled this as Raridash
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I've read one which is around 12k of clop.
All I can say is wow... that was freaking hot and was a really good story, I liked it a lot! That was indeed worth the favourite...
-frost
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Try "bechdels law",
I am not sure it will ever update again, but one of the sex scenes is ~15,000 of nonstop clop, if I remember correctly.
it was outragious. This is a very good length. and a very good story.
Twilight, you're so devious.
Plot twiiiist
Hmmm….
Now all of Twilight’s friends need to find out and add their own ‘adjustments’ to Rainbow Dash…
AJ: That’s right Rainbow, you love workin in my fields fer me allllllllllll day long for free
Fluttershy: You don’t need to join the Wonderbolts Rainbow Dash, just stay and protect me for the rest of your life
Pinkie: Okay Dashie, whenever I say pineapple, you’ll bark like a dog!
Rarity: Oh Rainbow you don’t need to fly fast and ruin that lovely mane of yours…now go try on these dresses you love to model for me.
Twilight: WHAT ARE YOU ALL DOING TO HER?
Applejack: Yeah, the pony that hypnotized her into a sex toy is getting indigent at our actions.
This is so very relevant to my interests... You don't even know.
Everything was good... Good... Good... Then time travel happened... Welp, I think I'm done here. What? I can only like and fave once? BLASPHEMY!
The only issues I had was that there was a point (during my favorite part of the aforementioned time travel) where you mentioned them having hands. I don't think this was anthro, or at least it didn't seem like it until then. Then, there was a spot right at the end of the clop sequence where you had incorrect tense (you put collapses instead of collapsed).
Other than that, this was fantastic. And if those were the ONLY problems... Well let's just say you deserve the featured box spot you earned.
You know, I can kinda see a dark sequel for this thing
. . . Buuuuuuuuuut I think that this is great just as it is.
*Edit* Not that I would mind getting a sequel either though
Zero-G, time travel sex, and that ending.
This was quite the tale.
~Skeeter The Lurker
...You brilliant bastard.
~Skeeter The Lurker
That was quite funny and well done
Very cute Twilight did that. 
I think I like this ending better
Brilliant. 
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Twilight can easily just go back and reverse all of them.
that there is pretty fucking good.
have a fav and why the hell not a follow as well.
GG Twilight using Rainbow's learning style like that
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Hey! Don't you know it's all about Twilight?
HOLY SHIT. Doctor Who reference.
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It was a wild ride that I will tell to my grandchildren decades from now.
I saw the twist coming because of the nature of the story; that being said, I think it would have been better if it had been set up differently though, as I think that having the setup and then the reveal that Rainbow Dash knew all along being more widely separated would have worked better.
mind
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Holy crap, scientific mind rape. Even then ... it was kinda hot. *goes to the next chapter*
Sorry to be 'That guy', but wouldn't it be that future twilight would stay, and past twilight would 'disappear' when using time travel? because it's past twilight that goes back in time, and then would become future twilight, meaning that future twilight would still be there.
4661951
No worries. Time can be a little difficult to understand when you start play around with it.
I believe your thinking that Future Twilight replaces Past Twilight, while Past Twilight becomes Future Twilight to replace herself. But the spell she uses just lets Future Twilight go back to the past for a hour and then it brings her back to the future a hour later. It's not a permanent, 'only go back' time travel spell. So, I'd imagine Future Twilight's timeline would be temporally Twilight-less, until she gets back anyway.
Isn't Time fun!
4662842 No, time is a temporal headache.
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A retroactively, dynamic, temporal headache.
It's like a quantum buck in the face!
Alot of the time travel aspect was confusing but overall, what an amazing story!!!
all my yes!!
4661951
Not exactly... In the show, the spell allows a pony to be sent back in time for a short duration, then come right back to when they started.
If anything, we should expect Twilight to pop back in on Dash a few seconds after the story ends.
Personally, I wouldn't mind seeing the story continue from 'Future' Twilights perspective, and see if she has any energy left for poor Dashie when she comes back.
4661951 I have just been mindfucked.
4647650 that sound really painful...
hehe , clever little fic you got here.....
Clever little rainbow.
After reading this, I can safely say
Like Dash and Twi and other Twi, we're all winners in the end.
Time has been destroyed in this fic.
Why?
Because past twi never traveled back an hour to start the whole thing like she was supposed to. Past twi goes back and future twi turns into present twi because past twi is now the future twi which has appeared for them an hour earlier.
If you need help understanding I recommend the Doctor Who episode where the TARDIS lands in itself. (look it up on YouTube, I would give a link but I'm on my phone.)
4661951
That's just what I said.
lol.
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Yeah but who casted the spell in the first place then? And what dash would she go to? She would even exist if it wasn't for past twilight being future twilight then they switch places and it keeps repeating. Watch that episode of Doctor Who I suggested to make more sense of this.
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Now there isn't a twilight at all? Where did Future twilight go? I'm so confused I think I like it!
I'm adding this to a list I'm making for my friends, (I call the list 'MLP fanfics you should read in your life time'.)
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Ok, people seem to be hung up on how the time loop is working...
So I made a chart thingy and tossed it into my DA Sta.sh.
Chart Thingy