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The CMC is known for their misadventures to get their cutie marks. Trying anything and everything to earn them.
So with that being said, how did they go from trying to find where a found key unlocks to ending up in their town a thousand years later and back? And what do they find out while there?
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Mane six still alicorns. K.....
I didn't know about the 3 months, 28 days, 7 hours, 14 minutes, and 9 seconds. Nor did I expect Pinkie Pie to be an alicorn.
This was very good read. thanks
very interesting to read.
I like it. Some grammar issues, but it's still great!
I like this story, but you completely ruined it.
You had the three fillies travel to the future and back. Nothing wrong with that.
But when you continued to say that they disappeared completely, that's where you went wrong.
If they truly did disappear, they wouldn't have returned to the past. You just ruined half of the entire plot by having the three of them return.
Now, I know of another story a lot like this. Three hundred and Fifty. This story has just about the same concept of your story. Some ponies go into the future by some means, and then they're told that they never returned, even though that was the original objective.
I'd say more about the story, but that would be spoiling it. You should read it, beginning to end, and then come back and say what you did wrong with this story.
4674618 wrote : "If they truly did disappear, they wouldn't have returned to the past. You just ruined half of the entire plot by having the three of them return."
Depends on the method of time travel and whether their disappearance was a fixed point or not.
I found it perfectly believable.
Matched what I know from other time travel stories as possible.
Instead of foul you probably mean foal.
Yay Babs
well for now (idk))
Now they are famous
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Okies, hace a Woot from me..