4816703 Fluttershy has a singular power that can impose fear into a creature that she is making direct eye contact with. That's no more Sue-ish than the fact that another pony can break the sound barrier without tearing the flesh from her body.
Twilight was already established right from the get-go as one of the most powerful unicorns in Equestria. That being said, she was unable to practice magic because of a plant, had difficulty levitating several animals at once in a continuous pattern, and was beaten by changelings.
Discord clearly does not have the power to do everything. If he did, he could have broken out of his statue at any time. The moment he was free, he could have made Celestia, Luna, and the physical elements vanish. He could not.
When the bearers came to confront him the first time, what did he do? He set them against themselves within a maze. He could have killed them, banished them, etc. Why doesn't he? Because it fits his character as the GOD of Chaos.
You have some human who put on a hat and literally gain the power to do anything forever with no way of ever stopping them, no way for them to ever face a challenge or grow as a character.
"What? A quest to go and find an ancient cure of a strange disease plaguing the country? I wish the disease was gone forever! Yay!"
Or, in the case of LoHAVs, "What? I acted like a bored jerk to ponies a long time ago and that made me public enemy number one? Oh no, whatever shall I do with my literally infinite power? Oh, guess I'll go and act like a douche 'for teh lulz'".
4818439 It's called constructive criticism. Your story has a glaring problem (you know, other than being part of a dying and generally disliked trend), and it requires attention.
I have but two requests PLEASE DON'T KILL TRIXIE OR CHRSALIS!!!! THEY ARE NEEDED FOR.......COMEDY..OR SEX..OR.......SHIT THAT IS ALL THERE GOOD FOR ISN'T IT? uh.....screw it they could be his puppets.
4638002 So he's just a massive Mary Sue, then?
4816679 So are Fluttershy, Twilight and Discord.
4816703 Fluttershy has a singular power that can impose fear into a creature that she is making direct eye contact with. That's no more Sue-ish than the fact that another pony can break the sound barrier without tearing the flesh from her body.
Twilight was already established right from the get-go as one of the most powerful unicorns in Equestria. That being said, she was unable to practice magic because of a plant, had difficulty levitating several animals at once in a continuous pattern, and was beaten by changelings.
Discord clearly does not have the power to do everything. If he did, he could have broken out of his statue at any time. The moment he was free, he could have made Celestia, Luna, and the physical elements vanish. He could not.
When the bearers came to confront him the first time, what did he do? He set them against themselves within a maze. He could have killed them, banished them, etc. Why doesn't he? Because it fits his character as the GOD of Chaos.
You have some human who put on a hat and literally gain the power to do anything forever with no way of ever stopping them, no way for them to ever face a challenge or grow as a character.
"What? A quest to go and find an ancient cure of a strange disease plaguing the country? I wish the disease was gone forever! Yay!"
Or, in the case of LoHAVs, "What? I acted like a bored jerk to ponies a long time ago and that made me public enemy number one? Oh no, whatever shall I do with my literally infinite power? Oh, guess I'll go and act like a douche 'for teh lulz'".
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I mean geez...
4818439 It's called constructive criticism. Your story has a glaring problem (you know, other than being part of a dying and generally disliked trend), and it requires attention.
well new story looking forward to
veery nice story so far
I have but two requests
PLEASE DON'T KILL TRIXIE OR CHRSALIS!!!! THEY ARE NEEDED FOR.......COMEDY..OR SEX..OR.......SHIT THAT IS ALL THERE GOOD FOR ISN'T IT?
uh.....screw it they could be his puppets.
5308088 Nopony is dying, at least on this cycle they aren't
The most they will get is horribly beaten or in Sombra's case being horribly humiliated.
You might want to fix that error in the description... Unless, you intentionally spelled "uncouncious" that way...
Keep it coming man. More of this I GOTTA see.
ALLIES? WHAT THE FUCK ARE THOSE?!
SOUNDS LIKE WEAKNESS TO ME.