When Spike decided that he was a special kind of dragon, he hadn't meant it literally. Now with a mysterious voice in his head, a growth spurt, and his friends, he's going to learn his own lessons about friendship, love, and the very essence of the world around him as he becomes the dragon he was always destined to become.
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Forgot an it or 'the sandwich'
Forgot a line space between the sixth and seventh paragraph.
Purple Unicorn Syndrome
Otherwise than that, the story looks interesting and I'll be watching to see where it goes.
Go it see this story is back up. I wonder what kind of changes you're going to bring. Please tell me your keeping the FlutterSpike.
4635898 Thanks, I must have missed that when I was proofreading. Haha. My bad!
4636025 I dunno, I was thinking Spike/Background Pony 34 as the endgame.
4636145 Wait-
You mean r34 between Spike and Background Pony?
4636145 Please tell me you're not taking away a possibly cute FlutterSpike.
Are you?
4636178 No, I mean background pony 34!
4636200 I hadn't even decided Flutterspike as end game on the old one, but don't worry, the Flutterspike elements are not going away, I'm just expanding on them. The old fic, I felt that I kind of rushed in getting there. There wasn't enough character development in my opinion to warrant a random out of nowhere romance. The next couple of chapters will address that.
i hope you don't plan to kill off celestia again
4637124 MUHUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA You'll have to read and find out.
so is it spike's dark side or someone for some reason is interested in spike,it's not some stalker is it?
I approve. Do continue.
4636374 fluttershy is better
I personally dislike all of the background ponies but its not my story so I wont decide
but I really hope to god it wont be rarity
that would probably ruin this story for me
EDIT: who's background pony 34
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4654096 dark side huh ??? perhaps a spike with black body Electric blue spines and dark purple belly??
Is this story dead?
Welcome back and congratulations on your new relationship.
7934261 I appreciate it. Glad to be back, to be honest. I had fun writing this new chapter.
Huh. It's back.
Well, there have been a lot of good fanfictions written by people who either no longer like the show or were never all that into it in the first place. But I'm still glad you're starting up again and happier.
Now for criticism: there is a lot of narration and less detailed events in this chapter. I'd encourage you to slow down a little on everything happening.
7935058 I will do my best. It's been a long time since I've written anything, and it will take time to get back to a good flow of things. I'm sure I'll get better at it. One of the benefits of a rewrite is it allows me to work out those muscles, so to speak, to get back into writing shape, and in all honesty I feel like this chapter was higher quality overall than it's counterpart in the OG version. All in all I feel that, though it's not the best start, it's enough to get me back into the saddle and riding to a new and better destination.
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Glad to hear you're ok and back to business. Good luck in new relationship.
Pewee!!!! Finally someone remembered him, I love that little guy, really hope he stays in this story and that you come back. The new episodes have been really great and make people want to write. I'll be keeping an eye out for this story, I like where you are going with it even if I hate Spike/Rarity and Twilight and Spike as mother and son *shivers* although you said siblings so that's even better. I'm really excited for more.
Cool story, metal name. Kinda wish there was more but if you're not feeling it then it doesn't make sense to force it.
I read about the original story and decided to check this out. I can't find the original story anywhere but I'm wondering, just how much of this will be different compared to the original?
Really wished this continued
Seeing Spike with powers is so cool to see
Are you ok?