Disclaimer: I am not, nor have I ever been associated with the military of any nation, nor do I have para-military training of any kind. I have never handled a firearm, been shot at, or watched someone die so I can’t claim to understand what it’s like to be a Marine . As should be obvious by now, the protagonist of this story is purely fictional. His opinions do not reflect the official position of the USMC, nor any member(s) thereof, and his mannerisms are not an accurate portrayal of any particular Marine, nor Marines as a group.
That said, this is not Call of Duty. I will try my utmost to keep the military aspect of this story grounded in reality. I’ve done my research and I will strive for technical accuracy, if I make a mistake, please, call me out on it.
Disclaimer 2: This is a fanfiction based on Hasbro’s My Little Pony, and Kkat’s Fallout: Equestria. This fanfiction is strictly non-commercial, the rights to any pre-existing characters or settings belong to the copyright holders, please support the official releases.
Special thanks: to my editors tebee, RobG Mull, et. al., my pre-readers, my readers in this thread, the several armed service members who critiqued my work, and the folks over at the spacebattles forum, without all of whom this story would be a mess of technical and grammatical errors.
Once upon a time, in on the not-so-magical-and-actually-quite-fucked-up land planet of Earthquestria, there were two sisters was a US Marine who signed up to defend his country. He was assigned to a fire team, the fire team assigned to a squad and the squad assigned to a platoon. Together they defended the area surrounding a Forward Operating Base in Afghanistan from insurgents. If only it were that simple.
Chapter 1: Of New Wars and PipBucks
“As a soldier, you can be sent to any area of the world... you could find yourself alone, in a remote area – possibly in enemy territory. This manual provides information and describes basic techniques that will enable you to survive and return alive, should you find yourself in such a situation.” Preface, US Army Survival Manual
"– and so I said, 'chicken nuggets? Are you crazy!?'" Exclaimed Jackson.
The two Marines in the Humvee’s back seat roared with laughter. I'd missed the setup so the joke didn't really work for me. I did crack a smile though. Heh. Oatmeal.
That’s right, I’m a Brony. Not that that’s a secret. There are no real secrets in the platoon. Relying on each other for your lives seems to make things like our TV preferences seem somewhat insignificant. So, despite some ribbing (no Jackson, Bronyism is NOT covered under “don’t ask, don’t tell!”), it was accepted just like Andrews’ bottle cap collection, or Jackson’s wild exaggerations of his teenage adventures. Hell, it gave us something to talk about, and when you’re stuck patrolling the same patch of dirt for eight months – anything – is better than talking about the weather. Let’s have an example conversation:
“Hot today isn’t it?”
“Yes, it is. Just like it was when you asked yesterday. Just like it has been for the last four months. So when you come up to me tomorrow, and you ask me, ‘Hot today isn’t it?’ my answer’s gonna be: it’s still freakin’ hot, and we’re still in a fucking desert.”
“How hot do you think it is?”
“I hate you.”
My short brown hair was plastered to my head beneath my combat helmet, a few beads of sweat pooling around the follicles creating an itch I’d learned to ignore. Gold-tinted Oakley sunglasses rubbed against the chinstrap while shielding my eyes from occasional blasts of light when the sun was unobstructed by cliffs. Ear plugs hung on a cord around my neck. According to SOP s written by some rear echelon motherfucker they were supposed to be inserted whenever I left the FOB, but seriously? Fuck that. I’d rather hear the enemy coming than die with intact eardrums.
Some people wonder whether humvees are comfortable like the civilian versions. They’re not. Mind you, when you’re wearing eighty pounds of combat gear in a hundred and ten degree heat, comfortable is not a term which is thrown around much. Humvees are utilitarian beasts, and when it’s a choice between a more comfortable seat and an extra fifty pounds of armor on the doors, I know which one I’ll pick. The seat. Man, fuck armor. Standard armor already stops seven-six-two’s, and if you get hit with an RPG you’re fucked anyway. It’s an anti-tank weapon, and no matter how much armor you bolt to a Humvee it’ll never be a fuckin’ Abrams! Damn PoG’s don’t think like that though. “Hur, der Marines ‘er tough, they c’n handle be’in uncomfortable!”
Yeah, of course, until it comes back and fucks you in the ass when you jump out into a firefight and can’t run straight.
Andrews was listening to my rant and peeked down from the gunner’s turret.
“Maligning the armor?” Asked Andrews with mock incredulity. “Oooo, tempting fate now aren’t we. Next you’ll be saying you’re two weeks from retirement!”
It was difficult to tell how serious he was being. We joke about fate and superstition, but at the same time we all have our rituals, the things we do just to appease lady fate. Little things, stupid things. Andrews wears a cross around his neck that I’d never seen before we deployed, Jackson listens to the same song, every day at the same time; even the Sergent is not immune. He stirs his cereal three times before eating, no more, no less. And me? I have my Twilight Sparkle: A little blind bag pony that stays in my pocket, where my nocs (night vision goggles) used to be, before they broke (dust proof my ass). We believed in luck, yet mocked the very idea of it - the mind’s way of dealing with what we can’t control.
“Fuck retirement, only way I retire in two weeks is in a bodybag,” I retorted. “I plan on a long and illustrious career of being shot at, blown up and unappreciated in some backwater country.”
“That why you re-enlisted?” He asked more seriously.
“What would I do as a civvie?” I deflected, “Get some shitty-ass customer service job and work it for the rest of my life? Fuck that shit, I’m a Marine.”
The first Humvee in the convoy exploded. Or at least the front of it did. Supersonic metal fragments pinged off our windscreen.
"IED!" someone yelled.
In the movies, this is where everything would go into slow motion. Real life was not so forgiving. Everything happened nauseatingly fast. No time to think, only react. We skidded off the road in a cloud of dust. I threw myself out of the Humvee, but – blinded by the dust cloud – I missed my footing and fell on my face. Tasting dirt and a trickle of salty blood from a split lip, I rose up into a crouch. I'd managed to keep a hold of my rifle. I could hear rounds being fired, impacting sand and metal. AK's. At this distance my armor would hold, but that didn't mean shit unless I got hit in the chest.
Goddamnit where were they! I scanned left. There up on the cliffs.
"Ten o'clock," I yelled, "up high!"
"I got more at three o'clock!" called Jackson, "looks like they're dug in!"
I fired my M16 ineffectually, wondering why the fifty wasn't firing. I looked back and was met with a sight that, upon reflection is horrifying, but at the time was just numbly accepted. No time for feelings. Most of Andrews' face had been blown out by a shot to the back of the head.
"We're too exposed," yelled the Sargent, “get to the cliffs, Pearson, you first, now, COVER FIRE!"
That was me. As my fire team fired off rounds, I sprinted forward for the first piece of cover I could find and dove into a convenient alcove in the rocks. Something wasn't right. I looked more closely and my blood ran cold. There was a wire sticking out of the ground.
"Secondaries!" I yelled, as I threw myself as far as I could back out into the street.
The explosion followed. Focused by the rock walls it threw me like a ragdoll, shrapnel tearing into my left leg.
I hit the ground. Hard.
-x-
When I awoke, it was cold and dark. Really dark. Thick clouds blocked both the moon and stars. Strange weather for summertime Afghanistan. I guess me and Jackson could finally have a meaningful discussion about the weather. Were was that guy anyways? And why had I chosen to sleep outside? We were supposed to return to the FOB...
Panicked, I scrabbled in the dark until my hand brushed over a familiar, calming shape.
This is my rifle, there are many like it, but this one is mine. Without me, my rifle is useless, without my rifle, I am useless.
An adage endlessly repeated by Boots and considered ‘stupid’ by veteran Marines, it nonetheless provides an idea of the bond between a Marine and his weapon, and helped bring me out of my near panic. As any Marine would tell you, anyone unfortunate enough to loose his rifle would likely experience a sensation not unlike excreting a number of standard masonry blocks. For those of you who have consumed MREs, this will require little imagination.
My head screwed on tight and pulse almost returned to normal, I let my training kick in.
Step one was figuring out my condition. Besides my leg, I didn’t feel particularly injured. I clearly wasn’t restrained, and seemed to be outdoors, so I probably wasn’t captured by the enemy, a fact that my loaded M16 seemed to confirm.
Step two was figuring out my location. Listening to the surrounding, I couldn't hear anything to suggest other people, or any other possible danger, only the faintest sound of what may have been a stream. Listening to the darkness did little to quell my nerves though: I had done my share of night watches, and there was something wrong here, the ambient noise here was . . . different somehow. Even the air smelled . . . off. Still, besides a general wrongness that grated at the back of my skull, my location seemed secure, and I wasn’t going to learn any more sitting in the dark.
I switched on the barrel-mounted flashlight, the powerful beam cutting through the darkness, finally allowing me to see my surroundings.
I recognised nothing. The Humvees, even the wreckage was gone. The cliffs were all wrong. Hell, even the dirt was wrong, it was soft and fine, completely unlike the coarse, sandy grit that filled my boots.
Were the hell was the rest of the Platoon? They couldn't just have left me behind! I pulled out my radio and turned it on, cycling through the different military channels... nothing. That wasn't too surprising; the range on those things is only a few miles. I put out a few calls, but I wasn't about to hold my breath.
Having learned all I could without resorting to anything drastic (like moving) I carefully placed my rifle down and removed the flashlight so I could get a better look at my leg. Luckily the shrapnel wound was not as serious as I’d feared. As I bandaged it, I noticed something bulky under my left sleeve. It was so comfortable that I hadn't noticed it up till this point. Rolling up my sleeve revealed some kind of wrist-mounted computer. A small emblem read 'PipBuck 3000'. Weird name.
I was hesitant to press the 'on' button in case it turned out to be packed with explosives. In Afghanistan, paranoia saves lives. My curiosity won out however after determining there was no way it was coming off without the rest of the arm. After all, someone had gone through the trouble of putting it on me while I was unconscious. If they'd wanted to kill me they'd have done so already.
The monochrome display lit up amber and revealed a map. Wow, retro. Suddenly my vision flashed, preventing me from examining the map. When it came back I could see a compass in the corner of my vision. I rubbed my eyes in disbelief. Some kind of retinal projection? From my wrist? I take back what I said about 'retro'. This was more advanced than I thought physically possible.
I noticed one direction was marked differently from the rest. Remembering the map on my wrist, I looked down and ... da fuck? There was a dotted line going from what I assumed was the “you are here” marker to a place called 'Ponyville'.
Since when do Afghans name their towns in English? Someone was having a joke. That or I was in some kind of coma dream. I still couldn't rule that out, though I couldn't quite bring myself to believe that. For now, this was real.
-x-
You’d probably think that as a Marine I’d feel right at home operating alone in what could potentially be enemy territory, that as a veteran of two wars I’d be ready for this. You’d be wrong. Sure I had some training, but I was a Rifleman, not Rambo. I lived and fought alongside my four man fire team, and most of the time with the other two fire teams of the squad backing us up. I hadn’t been truly alone in months and psychologically it took its toll.
With no idea where I was relative to… anything, I figured I may as well follow the nav point. I doubted I was within any kind of search area, heck, it was probably a different country. Equestria came to mind but I dismissed it out of hand. Ponyville wasn’t that unique of a name, and this didn’t much look like a magical utopia to me. If it was, I’d be giving Rainbow Dash a piece of my mind. This weather was ridiculous. I laughed at my own joke, but really I was freaking out. So I fell back on my training.
Right, first things first. Inventory; M16 A4, ACOG scope, flashlight, PEQ-15 laser eight 30 round mags FMJ 5.56mm, M203 under barrel grenade launcher with three 40mm grenades, multi-tool, med pack, standard combat knife, vest, helmet and ballistic goggles, sunglasses, hydration pack, two energy bars, a (useless) radio, an (equally useless) map of the area we had been patrolling and a mission report logbook. To my surprise this was all listed out in my (I guess I can call it mine, it is attached to me after all) PipBuck. Next to each of them was a value in ‘caps’. Whatever those were. The most intriguing thing was the entry for my armor. ‘Improved Modular Tactical Vest (Human Variant)’. ‘Human Variant’? As opposed to what?
I still couldn’t see much as I worked my way towards the nav point, but the ubiquitous mud I was trudging through seemed to confirm my suspicion that I was no longer in the desert. I swapped out my ACOG scope for the night vision attachment. This meant the sights were no longer zeroed of course, but it’d be good enough for close up work.
Ponyville turned out to be a collection of charred ruins. Only a few buildings were still standing, and even those looked to be on their last legs. No signs of repair either; this town had been abandoned long ago. People had died here. Civilians probably. Who fucking knew really? Truthfully it didn’t bother me. Whoever said “war never changes” never had to worry that any one of the civilians he was supposedly protecting could be strapped with explosives, or been forced to help rebuild a water-pump for a village that may very well harbor the same insurgents who had just sewn the road back to base with IED’s. There were times when a part of me felt it would be easier to just drop a MOAB on the damn villages and let God sort it out; the more rational part of my brain reminded me that ‘most’ of the civvies were decent people, just trying to survive, and that their support was critical to base security.
-x-
Gunshots. In my experience there's one surefire way to tell some 'tough guy' from a Marine. When startled, 'tough guys' freeze, their reflexes deadened over the years to demonstrate they have no fear. Marines duck. Fragments of brick and mortar sprayed from a nearby wall as it was struck by a bullet that I had little doubt was meant for me. I ducked behind said wall, and considered my options. My adrenaline kicked in full force and I felt like I could go hand-to-hand with a fucking bear!
I took a deep breath and controlled myself. I switched the safety off on my rifle, setting it to single shot with a satisfying ‘click’. I had to PiD (positively identify) the shooter. I did *not* want to be responsible for shooting some over-zealous young ANA (Afghan National Army) soldier, even if he had taken a shot at me. It was very dark after all, and he could probably see by my silhouette that I was armed.
The ANA was... not the most professional of armies. The training we gave them was, by necessity, limited, and they had a somewhat alarming tendency to get high on hash and opiates prior to or even during battle. This wasn’t to say they were useless. Far from it. We had to count on the fact that eventually they would be able to keep the peace if we were to have any hope of ending this war.
On the compass (which still kind of freaked me out, being superimposed onto my vision) a red bar seemed to indicate the position of the shooter. Useful, but it still didn’t tell me his intentions. Deciding that popping my head out into view of what I was ninety percent sure was a sniper was probably not conducive to staying alive, I explored other options.
“US Marines!” I yelled out, “Identify yourself!”
There was no response. I racked my brain tried to remember the phrase in Dari, the local dialect, but was drawing a blank. Fuck. We’d always relied on the interpreters to interact with the locals. ‘US Marines’ should have been clear enough anyway. It’s not like that needed a translation.
I had an idea. In daylight, it would have been far too obvious, but in this darkness it just might work. I was betting the sniper wouldn’t have the benefit of night optics. Pulling my combat knife, I stuck it into the mortar between two bricks close to ground level. Making as little sound as possible, I removed them, creating a hole large enough for the rifle and its scope. I lay prone behind the wall poking the barrel through the gap and activated the night vision scope. With a high pitched whine the area beyond the wall lit up in fuzzy green detail. What I saw shocked me, which was quite a feat considering my already elevated state. What I could see was, without a doubt, a facsimile of Rarity’s Carousel Boutique. Who had built it, and why, was beyond me, but right now I had more pressing concerns. I had to identify the sniper before he spotted the faint glow given off by my scope. I flicked on the infrared laser, the sight wasn’t zeroed, but the laser was. Zeroed at 100 feet mind you (it was offset from the barrel), so if the shot was further, I’d have to adjust my aim right. The invisible beam glowed brightly through the scope cutting a swath through the air as I looked for my target.
Now it wasn’t unusual to see horses in Afghanistan, nor even for insurgents to fight from horseback, so when I looked through the scope and saw something vaguely horse-shaped I wasn’t particularly perturbed. As I looked closer however, I saw two things wrong with it. The first was that it was wearing some kind of armored barding, which quite frankly was ridiculous. Insurgents could rarely afford armor for themselves, let alone their horses. The second, and more important problem, which I had to believe was some kind of trick of the light, was that it was riderless, and somehow levitated a rifle above its head.
I took my eye away from the scope and sure enough, I saw what could be the faint glow of telekinesis around the rifle, about 50 yards away. Which meant... which meant that... fuck. Which meant I was seeing things. The rider’s clothing must be deflecting light peculiarly, messing with the scope. Not being completely insane, as far as I knew, I wasn’t willing to entertain the other option that was staring me in the face. Still, I had PiD’d the target. He was definitely armed and, even if I couldn’t see him, from his armaments he was definitely not NATO or ANA.
“Cleared hot,” I whispered to no one, not used to working alone.
This wouldn’t be the first person I’d shot, but it still wasn’t something I enjoyed. I went over my rationale again. If the rider was going to see my scope glow, he would have fired by now. I was well aware that he was probably not alone, and if I fired I would give away my position as surely as sending up a flare. The fact that I couldn’t see anyone else through the windows was making me nervous, they could be trying to flank me. Could I slink away without being seen? Probably not. There was a lot of open ground before the next piece of cover from the sniper.
What was my evidence for him being hostile? He’d seen a lone, armed figure walking towards his camp and taken a, literal and figurative, shot in the dark. Hell of a reason to kill somebody. I might have done the same thing! Fuck this war. Why couldn’t this shit ever be black and white? Give me a bunch of God-damned Nazi zombies to kill any day.
The RoE (rules of engagement) were clear. I could shoot him now, and I was probably going to have to. Completely inappropriately, a thought crawled into my head as I felt a piece of hard plastic dig slightly into my chest. What would Twilight Sparkle do in this situation?
Probably go insane like me, and start thinking about imaginary characters. Fuck. No. I knew what she’d do. She wouldn’t do anything. If her friends were here, she would take the shot, to protect them – just as I had in the past. By myself... by herself, she wouldn’t do it because she would never be able to live with herself afterwards, even if it was self-defence.
But I wasn’t Twilight Sparkle.
I calmed by breath, exhaling slowly and aimed roughly half a meter above the horse’s head, where the rider’s chest should be.
I was a Marine, a trained killer.
I pulled the trigger.
My rifle cracked authoritatively, the vibration knocking the scope out of focus.
“Piece of crap!” I muttered, smacking it with my gloved hand, “Never see this shit in Call of Duty.”
The scope sputtered, cutting to black, then blurred back into focus. I looked and observed... no effect on target. The rifle was still right where it was before, appearing to float amid the blackness. Seemingly without warning it started firing wildly. A trained individual should have been able to spot my muzzle flash; the insurgents were many things, but highly trained was not one of them. At this rate he’d run out of ammo before he even saw me. Right, I thought, new plan. Wait till he starts to reload, then shoot the horse and run. It had always seemed kind of slack to me to shoot enemy animals (a favorite tactic of the insurgents was to strap IED’s to pack animals, the safest way to disarm them being to detonate from a distance), they didn’t have any choice after all, but if it was him or me, it was going to be him.
I shifted my aim slightly lower, keeping the laser on the horse’s head. I might as well make it quick. I saw the mag drop from the – supposedly – floating rifle and took the shot. This time the effect was immediate: the rifle clattered to the floor, followed shortly by the horse. The gunman was still nowhere to be seen.
I rose up into a crouch and started moving away from the wall, but then I saw another red bar on my HUD. This time I knew what it meant. I spun left and flicked on my flashlight. My assailant was shocked by the sudden brightness, but not as shocked as I was. There was no denying it now. This creature, charging at me with a rusty machete clenched in its teeth, wearing blood stained leather armor, was a pony. Not a small horse but an, honest to god, fucking FiM, G4 pony. The enormous eyes and bright blue coat left no doubt in my mind, leaving me to wonder what substance I could possibly have consumed to make me trip balls like this. Fortunately I didn’t have time for a protracted questioning of my sanity, my survival instincts forcing me to accept instantly what would no-doubt have taken hours of intense introspection to come to terms with; I was in Equestria.
The pony resumed his charge. While the RoE was strict, (not that I was under any obligation to follow it at this point), charging a US Marine with a rusty knife was still more than enough to get you shot. That said, the RoE was far from my mind as I fired two rounds into his center mass.
He stumbled and fell, a pool of blood spread out like an oil slick in the blackness of the night. My Little Pony, laying in a pool of blood. The show was just about the only thing in my life that I had considered wholly pure and innocent. It would be a lie to say I’d never imagined living there. Of course something so pure could never survive contact with me.
Three more red bars, behind me this time. Eyes in the back of my head, I was starting to like this PipBuck more and more. Flicking off my flashlight I sighted my first target, and fired.
The shot went low, the green pony stumbling as her foreleg shattered. Another gunshot rang out, but not mine. Fuck that hurt. The round hit me in the shoulder, fortunately it was of low caliber and my armor did its job.
I rounded on the shot’s location and put a round through the offending pony’s head. I turned to face my last opponent, but he was already upon me. At the last second I think he may have realised the folly of going up against a creature twice his size in hand to hoof combat, but any such thought was cut short as I brought the butt of my rifle down on his head. There was no cute little staggering around like you might expect from a cartoon pony. Instead he hit the ground like a sack of bricks.
Footnote:
SPECIAL: James Pearson
Strength: 7[+]
Perception: 8[+]
Endurance: 6[-]
Charisma: 4
Intelligence: 6
Agility: 6
Luck: 4
Perk added: Marine – Your years of combat experience grant you +1 to Perception and Strength as well as a 25% accuracy bonus when wielding rifles or semi-automatic pistols.
Trait added: Human – Your dexterous hands give you an extra 15 points each to repair and survival, but you suffer -1 endurance and -50% movement speed over open ground. Due to your alien appearance equine characters may flee from you or attack without provocation.
Author’s note: FoE (as a fanfiction), and Fallout (the games) do not exist on the Earth the protagonist comes from.
Author's note 2: I've started a new degree, I've got a new job at a hospital and I'm a voice actor in the Equestria Softworks Fallout 3 mod. Not-giving-a-fuck levels have finally reached high enough that I'm re-releasing this chapter as version 1.5, in preparation for the release of chapter 2. You can eventually expect a a chapter 1 version 2.0 where I find a way to remove the night vision scope and fix another bunch of errors, but this won't change the story overly much (probably).
sounds badass. I'm tracking to see where this goes
An HiFO:E?
I LOVE YOU.
Not another one
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Another one? I was under the impression I was the first...
edit: nevermind.
So this is an alternate universe and an alternate dimension story?
Nice.
Do want. DO WANT!
Two in two days! YES! I have waited for a HIFO:E for ages and now I get two (except the other guy got turned into a pony)
I greatly enjoyed this! I demand MOAR!
Hoof up if you caught the Red vs. Blue Reference.
i frikking love this.
Huh, I was under the impression that this was the first of its kind, but after looking through the commemts I guess not. Anyways, this is looking awesome so far. Keep it up.
First off, What self respecting brony has never heard of Fallout Equestria?
Secondly, it's well written and a pretty good read so far. The flood of military jargon was a little much, but it's not a deal killer. Just let up on it in future chapters, there are a good amount of people who won't understand it, even if you explain it. Keep it up Anon3mous1.
Thirdly, James was pretty lucky to be packing state of the art military tech, really. Last time I checked only a limited number of troops had been issued dragon skin armor.
Finally,You guys aren't getting it. He's not just a Human, he's a marine. A F$%^&*!* marine. This is a Marine in Fallout: Equestria fic, not a HiFO:E fic. It's a pretty original concept if you think about it.
I'll definitely keep track of this one.
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Maybe he's gonna recall something about Fallout: Equestria, but doesn't really know because he's not into fanfic? Just a suggestion.... but really anything will do if the story continues to be this good and well-written. Interested to see where this goes, keep it up!
I'll track for now and rate later. Good job.
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hivemind is just a troll, it posts that on anything related to Fallout: Equestria, just ignore it :)
433594
Okay, a few things to clear up.
1. This is AU. Fallout Equestria (as a story) doesn't exist in Pearson's world, neither do the fallout games. (I'll probably have to specify this later on)
2. Yeah, there's not going to be much more military Jargon, it was really just to set the mood in that scene.
3. No soldiers are issued Dragonskin, the marines is the last branch of service which allows soldiers to wear Dragonskin if they or their family's purchase it themselves it costs around $10,000 if remember correctly. It has been banned in the Army (although a general and his body guards were caught wearing it).
433880
Really? Why was it banned?
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Officially, it is inferior to interceptor and MAV armour, making it a liability in combat (they performed their own non-independent tests). Unofficially, the DoD has massive contracts with the current armour manufacturers (which it wanted to keep) and they wanted to avoid what was fast becoming a PR nightmare where soldier's families felt that they had to spend their own money to ensure their loved ones had the best protection in the field.
433956
Oh.
433956
So basically, money and politics.
434218
yep even the maker of the interceptor armor said the Dragonskin was FAR superior to his own armor
One thing has been bugging me; would a Pipbuck even fit on a human? More importantly, would it even be able to accurately monitor the vitals of what is essentially an alien?
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The magic in PipBucks seems to be very robust and adaptable. They work across multiple species in the wasteland, not just ponies, so I don't think it's too much of a stretch to say it could work on another mammal who's vital organs are quite similar to ponies - we'd probably be closer to ponies in physiology than ponies are to griffons.
In terms of fitting, a pony's foreleg is probably about the same as our wrist (their limbs are thicker than ours proportional to their body and actually seem to bizarrely widen out towards the fetlock making the hoof blend into the leg), especially if we take into account large stallions who could be nearly 5' tall.
The pony pictured in the cover art is a foal and so is approximately 2 feet tall (to the head), so maybe 1.2' at the shoulder.
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Though, the whole limb crippleage meter might be a little messed up.
I ROFLed at the description.
Well, looks like you beat me to the punch on submsubmit the first Fallout HiE fic. Haven't read ot yef, and it is tiresome to type it out on a phone. Will get back to you.
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When is the next chapter hope its soon!
Awesome story I really like the concept and it is nicely written so far :) just one minor remark on the "human perk" if you compare the physiology of a human to a pony the human would probably not be at a disadvantage when it comes to endurance. The human body is actually very enduring when compared to other animals and a lot of that is because we are bipedal giving us very effective breathing while running and also because of how the feet archs giving sort of a spring to the step and conserving energy. When you think about it it is not that surprising. Since humans are really quite slow compared to the animals we like to hunt. A very early hunting teqhnique was to simply follow the animal until it collapsed in exahaustion. A hunting teqhnique that is actually still used by some tribes. Now horses are also very enduring creatures since they naturally would wander over plains with relatively sparse food and so would have to move often and far. Given a well trained human would probably not be able to compete with a well trained racing horse but the ponies are not breed racing horses and given their size would probably put my money on the human if it came to a pure endurance competition. And seriously i got way to carried away with this comment xD now I don't expect you to change your story just because of some useless trivia that noone really cares about I just thought someone might find it interesting and i'm really bored...
... please post the next chapter soon xD
Hi, actual Marine here. Haven't read the story yet, just wanted to point out that squads are assigned to platoons which are then assigned to companies.
I haven't read the main Fallout: Equestria story either (yet). Should I do so before reading yours? If not, I'd like to run through and offer some advice on getting the jargon/procedure stuff correct. If you wouldn't mind, that is.
Dammit, you have a similar story to mine.
Fallout Equestria: Fading Echoes.
Ah ha! Mine got published and accepted first!
433176 I didn't say Stephen was going to stay a pony FOREVER. Just for the first part.
435822 I know! I know! I didn't say that! I just said that he was turned into a pony, which he was.
AAh, finally a keyboard.
Now first off, splendid story that you got ere chap.
Not much that I can offer in terms of criticism unfortunately
@batteredshrimp: Highly advised you read the base story of Fallout Equestria first before reading this.
Or at the very least, played the games, any of them will suffice, though it mostly seems to be based on Washington DC.
As for myself... Well, like I already have the first chapter partly written out.
Alas, it is stuck on a tablet that won't charge, not to mention I need to figure out a way
to transfer the files without pissing on both the PC and Tablet itself.
While we bipeds are certainly slower,however,I'm pretty sure we can turn around faster and are less unwieldy in tight spaces and rough terrain.
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I would absolutely love anything you can tell me about jargon/procedure and life as a Marine! Given that I don't have any actual firearms or military experience I'm sure I screwed up a few things. Don't worry about getting too technical though, I have a background in engineering.
In fact I would love to have you as a technical adviser, so that I can ask you about things when I'm writing future chapters.
Anyway, while my story no-doubt contains -some- spoilers about FoE (though most are from the first chapter of FoE), it is an independent story, so it should be able to be read weather or not someone has knowledge of FoE.
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In terms of flat out speed and endurance, quadrupedal animals a have an advantage (especially when carrying a load). They have twice as many limbs on on the ground and they expend far less of their energy keeping themselves upright. When we run, we are essentially falling forward with each step pushing us back up again.
Alright, I've looked into it, and according to a bunch of marathon runners you can outrun a horse over a 26 mile race, but mainly because your body cools itself by sweating rather than panting. This allows better heat dissipation without interfering with breathing, but this would only make a difference to people who are ultra long distance runners. Marines tend to have a lot more muscle mass than they do and so would fatigue faster, especially if they're carrying a full set of gear. Unfortunately for you the average horse can run three times faster than a human, so even a pony could probably outpace you most of the time.
In terms of agility/climbing, yes, we definitely have the advantage, we're apes after-all. That's why the negative effects only take effect over open ground. In a CQC situation humans would have an enormous advantage over pegasi and earth ponies because we can bring our weapons to around faster, and a smaller one towards unicorns because although they have more freedom with their weapons, we can turn and move faster in enclosed spaces.
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Not all marines are bulky, and all of them have endurance training. Hell, half of the time at boot camp is for endurance training. 5 mile runs with full gear through rain, sleet, snow, or 100+ degree weather.
Although I do have to give you the fact that even a marine can't carry as much as a quadruped. I believe the average weight is about 90 lbs for a fully geared marine. But carry weight isn't effected by endurance, it's effected by strength. I also concede that, in terms of top speed, the quadrupeds would be faster. So Maybe the downside of the human trait should be -2 to strength or -20% to top speed instead of -1 to endurance.
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I'm not saying Marines are necessarily bulky, but if you've seen an ultra long distance runner, they are REALLY thin, almost to an unhealthy degree.
Jackie, a horse can run 5 miles faster than you while carrying a human on its back. I don't deny that Marines are tough but that doesn't make them super human. 5 miles is not very far for a horse.
I was thinking of reducing carry weight, but I'd probably do that directly by -lbs rather than strength, which would affect close combat capability.
436528 Yes quadrupeds do have an advantage while simply standing but that falling forward motion combined with the way our feet are formed gives a human a maximum lenght travelled/energy at slight jogging speed rather than at walking speed as is the case with quadrupeds. I checked a chart over energy/travelled lenght and on that part a horse is indeed more efficient than a human but not by to much and the horse must remain at walking speed to retain it's effieciency lead which is about 6km/h for the average pony while the human is as most efficient at jogging speed which is at an average of about 9.6km/h. So while the horse is more enduring this still allows a human to catch one by forcing it to go at a higher speed than it's maximum efficency. But this of course still means that the pony is more enduring than a human so the trait is probably correct. I just feel that the downside quite heavily outweigh the benefits of the trait. Maybe you should add like an agility bonus or something.
Oh. My. God.
I've always thought about doing a human in the Fallout: Equestria universe.
Super glad you beat me to it. I love it! Can't wait for more.
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I suppose I could give +1 AGL, but with the Marine perk he's already pretty OP for a level 1... I'll think about it. I was also considering a boost to melee weapons and a drop in barter/CHR, but it's already a pretty complicated trait.
439423 yeah probably but i guess it doesn't really matter since you can do what you want with in the story anyways. I really don't think the special is something that makes or brakes the story :)
I was a bit worried about reading another Human in equestria story (the majority are absolutely dire) but this was recomended to me and I must say I'm impressed. Looking forward to more. Very well done.
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My concern is that if you make the protagonist OP with high SPECIALs people start screaming 'Mary Sue' and disregard your characterisation in favour of looking for ways in which the character is a self insert.
Outside of the initial wondering about the wisdom of the insta-Pipbuck 3k, I'm really liking how this is turning out!
I eagerly await the next instalment!
Also, the volume of jargon used is not an issue. To be honest, it only pulled me in that much further.
440987 Yeah I get you :) personally I try to cope with this by giving all the cool abilities that I want to a bunch of different charachters instead of just one. That way the stories don't get too over the top but I can still fill them with everything I want (or maybe not everything but you get the point )
I only see one problem in this story
the use of Dragonskin armor in the any branch of the military is illegal
Great Story Bro! but I hope you doesn't make the main character doesn't get to godlike powerful like most HiE I read.
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Damnit, Wikipedia lied to me:
"The Marine Corps has not issued a similar directive, but Marines are "encouraged to wear Marine Corps-issued body armor since this armor has been tested to meet fleet standards."
Further research has revealed the Marines have banned it as of 2007 (although there is a loophole which lets them wear it over their MTVs, stupid as that may sound). As there's no date on this story, lets just assume either:
a) this story takes place before the ban or;
b) they're on a remote FOB and the CO may be letting it slide or;
c) it's AU and I can do whatever I want muhahahahahahaha!
Seriously though, thanks for the correction, I do want to keep the Earth portion as close as I can to real life.
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I'll try to make sure that won't happen, keep in mind that the ponies in this HiE are not as helpless and unarmed as they usually are in such stories.
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Yes, it was an interesting decision on my part to give him an insta-Pipboy... but think about what that means.
It means he wasn't just randomly dropped there in a magical accident. Somepony, or some-thing, has given him a pipbuck - but for what purpose? You'll just have to keep reading to find out.
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If he can find anyone who won't shoot him on sight, I'll see what I can do
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I'm glad I could exceed your expectations
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I don't see why, you're stories seem pretty well received.
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Well then, I guess we'll just have to fight to the death first one to die removes their story... wait...