A certain princess needs to take a retreat from the castle, and seeks out the comfort of her favorite local spot. While relaxing, she comes across the opportunity of a lifetime.
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I'm guessing Twilight's in love with Luna and that pony is Luna in disguise? Hope so. Of course, judging from your other fics It's probably unlikely.
Outside of that, the dialogue is somewhat bland and seems repetitive. I kinda just semi-skimmed it to see if I could figure out who Twilight got her jumblies in a mess for, but that's what it seemed to me. Also, it's a little bit showy as well, but years above most of the other stuff around. Work on that a bit and I'll see where this goes.
Good story more pweaz my heartz wantz morez of thiz wonderfulnesz of wonder
This was great great job. I hope to see more soon.
I hope this story doesn't die. It seems like all of the really good stories I find never take off. This is a good story. Not sure why it has so little attention.
Gonna update brah? This is a pretty damn good story please continue.
update update?
Well, I am cautiously interested.... Really really hope it's not another Twiluna fic.
So No more updates? This is a good fic I would hate to see you quit before it's even started.
Update? Please respond.
Hello?
Not to be a duche but im sick of this shit. Every fucking fantastic fanfiction I find simply never updates or gets cancelled and the author never replies. Next thing you know you've been waiting 3 years for answers.
I understand you have a life and cant spend evey waking moment of it writing stories but if you are no longer going to update your stories please have the decency to let your readers know. Don't leave us in the dark man.