Rainbow's Dash day did not start out so good, but her spirits were lifted when she saw her long time friend Derpy. Unfrotunately for them, her dark past may catch up with them today. Memories will come back regrets will be made and in the end, it is always just another fall. EDIT: Just thought of a continuation, will become a two-shot now.
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I have reviewed your story. I like it very much, but it could be polished up more with some grammar issues here and there, and the pacing. Overall, well done.
4622646 Thank you very much, these are the type of reviews I'm looking for. Gramar issues are always sprinkled in my stories but pacing still remains to be my weakness. I really hope to improve on that soon. Thanks for the review and I hope you have a nice day!
4622662 You're welcome! :D
4637600 So was the story good?
yes. It was fantastic. But that was so bucking sad. it made me cry
4639718 Thanks. I meant for it to be sad...
ASBJCYXNHVVGV DERPY NOOOOOOOO
4688938 There will be one more chapter when I get to it.