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Tiaa OwO


I'm possibly the weirdest girl you'd meet. I love to draw, write, read, and I've developed a love of learning and understanding new languages and cultures. I alos love tomake new friends. :)

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I can't wait to see my new baby sister. I've been waiting really long for the baby to come out of mommy's tummy. I'm waiting in the big white room with lots of chairs. The nice nurse calls it the 'Waiting Room'. That makes sense. It's for ponies who wait. Hold on. Daddy's coming out of mommy's giving birth room. He looks upset.
"Hi daddy." I say. Daddy doesn't say anything. I don't think he heard me. His eyes are red. "Daddy, where's my sister?" I think I said something wrong. Daddy begins to cry.
"There's no baby, Sammy."
Warning: Minor Gore Scenes Present

Inspired by a horror game

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Whathe FUCK kinda games you playing, Author?

wth game did you play?

Was this in any way inspired by Eraserhead?

Because if it was then I need to marry you.

Edit: alright, having read it, I misunderstood what it was originally about. I thought you were going with a demonic birth, not possession. The story was written well, but it wasn't written... Very pony like. All the OCs had human names and the father said "Jesus" something I'm fairly certain equestria does not have.

It did freak me out though, so good job.

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They were playing with a spirit board. The evil spirit got loose when they did something wrong.

4635430 It was supposed to be freaky and confusing, to make the reader guessing and confused until the end.:pinkiecrazy:

4635430 I have edited the "Jesus" part but I have to say, I enjoy OC ponies with with more human names.:twilightsmile:

4635783 right, but it breaks the story setting. It's like if I gave my oc in a Harry potter fanfic an autobot name. It just doesn't fit and looks silly. With human names in ponyfics, however, it also shows laziness and the inability to come up with a creative name.

4636227 Well, I see your point. I could change the names but wouldn't it be too late to do so anyway? I have some pretty 'creative' names in mind.

4636227 Actually, I've grown quite attached to Samantha's name. I love that name for some reason. I'll change the parents' names but I'll just chalk up the filly's name from the parents wanting something more exotic that usual pony names.

4636320 Samantha is alright, that's not too much of a stretch; Stan and whatever the mothers name was though...

4636730 :rainbowlaugh: Felicia.
I changed the mothers name to Flower and the fathers to Star Tip. Their not too odd feeling-ish since I've gotten used to the other names. I hope this helps.:twilightsmile:

What.the.ACTUAL.FUCK did I just read!?!?!?? :rainbowhuh: :unsuresweetie: :twilightoops: :rainbowderp:

4642311 An amazingly creepy Horror story:ajsmug:

The game was Among The Sleep huh?

4644249 Yessssss! OMG, how did you know!? Thank you for reminding what it was called because I had total memory loss at the moment. Did you play it? If you did, omg, you gotta be like the coolest guy I've ever met.

4645129 Drunken mom and family problems, teddy bear friend and a child. It was very similar and I made the connections. I haven't played it but I saw the whole thing and loved it.

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OMG, I am sooo stupid! The story was inspired a lot by a horror game called Forgotten but had a few things added to it that I got from Among The Sleep. I comeplenty forgot! Which is funny because that's what the game was called.... lol.....:facehoof::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

wait what? thers more? :pinkiehappy: ha YAY when i got to the dimomic tedy bear i just fucking loughed my ass of and as for makeing more of this story *clears throught* DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IIIIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTT :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

so sad:fluttercry:yet so awesome please write more:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::heart:

4998252 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll start working on another part real soon:twilightsmile:

If this is part one, then why does it say complete?

5229178 Working on part two...let me fix that...

Omg! How is it possible for a story to be this awesome?! I love it! It doesn't even need more to be more but if there is then that's just doubling the awesome! Great job!

6322853 Thanks I'm glad you liked it!

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