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The Mane 6 are captured by Hugo Strange, and are sent into Arkham City. He separates them and steals the Elements of Harmony. He plans to use them for Protocol 10. They must find a way to get the Elements back, get reunited, and get back to Equestria.

This is a fan-written side story of what is happening in Batman: Arkham City. Its a story about the 6 main Ponies, not Batman. I first uploaded this story on my Deviantart on February 13, 2012. I'm just now putting it on here also.

Chapters (26)
Comments ( 292 )

Seriously, what is with these nonsensical crossovers? I'm sorry for ranting on your story page, but really, these crossovers are starting to get ridiculous. :ajbemused:

430780 Well, you're entitled to your own opinion. While I dont agree with it, I respect you for sharing it. It was just an idea I had one day! :twilightsmile: My friends all loved it! Your review is the first negative review I've gotten, but you have every right in the world to disagree. Either way, thank you for reading! :pinkiehappy:

431251 Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it! :pinkiehappy: I try to get a new chapter up about every two weeks, but I will upload it sooner if I finish it sooner.

Well done for writing this, it's a real laugh :)

I want to see how rarity and freeze interact soooo bad. I can't wait:yay:

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And they escaped from The Riddler just like that, talking about luck:pinkiehappy:

So Riddler kidnapped everyone inside the church, I wonder what will the ponies do next. Also, will catwoman make an appeareance?

You have no idea how excited I was when I saw that this story had updated, please take all the time you need to make such a wonderful story

YOU ARE ALL SO NICE!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! :pinkiehappy:

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I if you don't like crossovers... don't read em :derpytongue2:

I think its well written EVEN IF i have barely any experience with the Batman story and all that. Kept me engaged and i enjoyed it a lot!

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Dude this story is great.... I wish i had creative talent LOL :derpytongue2:

Crap, Pinkie thought Joker is a good guy. This can't be good

What if Joker took in Pinkie as a pet? He would pet her as a guys face started melting with acid. Harley will be so jealous...:derpytongue2:

Fourth wall breaking FTW.:pinkiehappy:

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HAHA! :rainbowlaugh: Thank you very much for your support and love in the story, my friend! :pinkiehappy:

1. Pinkie breaking the fourth wall = wonderful
2. The idea of the joker meeting pinkie is marvelously tantalizing. I just hope for his sake she doesn't turn into pinkiemina on him. Nobody deserves that, not even the joker.
Can't wait for the next chapter, ciao darling :duck:

So much darkness and madness in this story... and i love it!:pinkiecrazy: I really hope you keep writing it.

Well that's a fairly meaty chapter. But what of Pinkie good sir?

1342222 The next chapter will totally belong to Pinkie Pie. I give it a few more days before its up.

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I like the way you say that it belongs to her. It will be hers and she will do with it as she pleases.

Thank you! It was an awesome chapter. :pinkiehappy:

...Why do I get the feeling that Joker is not only going to do to Pinkie what he did to Bats, but also Pinkie's going to have to fight Harley?

This chapter was awesome!!:pinkiehappy:

My god, that was SO AWESOME!!!!!:rainbowkiss:
I loved the battle and the resolution to Rarity's arc, I do hope we get a glimpse of what Strange is planning with the elements, and of course, to get to see pinkie interact with the joker,

Oh, and by the way, the size of this chapter was incredible! It must have draw you :pinkiecrazy:, to write such a long chap.

I can't wait to see how Pinkie and the Joker hit it off.

if it werent for the fact that the joker is complete homicidal maniac he would probably get along pretty well with Pinkie

Honestly I can't wait to see Riddler's reaction when Twilight rescues Applejack with magic

1605447 Lol, he's gonna throw the biggest tantrum ever! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:.

:facehoof: Seriously, Pinkie? Seriously?

This is actually pretty interesting.

Mr. J is a manipulative bastard... that's why I love him!:pinkiecrazy:

Well, things are really getting into motion now! Twilight beating the Riddler was priceless :rainbowlaugh:, and Batman, Rainbow and (maybe) Pinkie are about to face the Demon Trials! :pinkiegasp: Well it will make more sense if only Bats and Rainbow did them, since Pinkie can't fly or glide, although, she can always play her classical "No laws of physics" game :pinkiecrazy:.

Riddle me this:
I stand with you morning, noon, and night.
Should you need the time, I'm just within sight.
What am I?

Very well-written! Both the Mane 6 and the Batman characters act like how they would normally. I don't think the DC Universe would give a second glance to talking colored ponies, considering a ton of much weirder stuff it has. :twilightsheepish:

Also, that awkward moment when you realize that Twilight and Harley Quinn are both voiced by the same voice actor...:eeyup:
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You know, I just noticed, but Batman must be the only superhero whose cape actually has a function to it, unlike other heroes, who only have it for the heck of it. Well, there's also Spawn, but his, wasn't technically a cape; it was a demonic weapon that could become anything.

Lols I loved how Riddler reacted to Twilight's magic. Like an atheist meeting the real Santa Claues. Here's a thought; :ajbemused:"HEY RIDDLER!" Applejack yells. "Riddle me THIS!" She then bucks Riddler in the face. "How many stars do ya see!?"

I've been reading your story while listening to both "Batman Arkham City In game Soundtrack" and "Batman TAS Original Score". :twilightsheepish:

I've been reading this for awhile and here is my full thought process on the story.

It's excellent.
Your descriptive writing is top-notch, if I hadn't played the game already, I still would have a very detailed image in my head of the surrounding environment. Something very hard to do in writing.

Next, characters. Everyone is exactly how they should be. Batman is neutral and collected, Penguin is still an ass, the inmates are still violent and funny (in a dark way), and the Mane 6 are still true to their characters. What's really amazing is how it all blends together so perfectly, something I never thought possible of Batman and My Little Pony. Many writers have tried and failed miserably at this mix, but you've made it a huge success.

Dialogue. It's perfect, everyone says what I expect them to say for the most part. Especially penguin, you've kept his hardened criminal state true. Man he's one scary son of a... anyway.

Story Development. It follows the storyline of Arkham City to the dot. It also adds in a lot of back story which is original and great.

All in all - I give it a 10/10. There's the occasional mistake, but seriously, who can nab every mistake? Bottom line - Keep writing more even after this story is finished. You have some awesome talent my friend.

1885228 Thank you so very much! You have no idea how happy that makes me feel! :pinkiehappy:

I hope you continue soon, since I want to know if pinkie and dash will help against Ras Al Gul, and how will fluttwer will escape from the mad hatter and his twisted tea party.

Oh god, the Mad Hatter has Fluttershy? I hope she doesn't end up like any of his Alices...

And I hope Bats helps Pinkie and Rainbow get through the Demon Trials.

Wow, wasn't expecting that Mad Hatter's twist :rainbowderp:. Really looking forward for the Demon Trials and Killercroc's small appearence :pinkiesmile:.

Mad Hatter has Fluttershy!! :fluttershysad:

Can't wait to see how Pinkie and Rainbow help Bats with the Demon Trials..:rainbowdetermined2::pinkiecrazy:

:raritydespair: Why, why can't Fluttershy catch a break?
Ciao darling :raritywink:

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