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DontWakeTheNeighbour


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With the whole of Equestria plunged into darkness, the once peacfull world is now tearing itself appart with fear. Twilight, Fluttershy, Rarity and Spike are now the only hope the world has.
They choose to leave their home to save Rainbow Dash. Despite loosing their friends because of her they are determined to prove she can be saved from her madness, which is slowly consuming her. But will there be anything to save?

Chapters (16)
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Comments ( 324 )

Looking good so far. Make rainbow dash die a bad death.

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I'm not the one who orphaned Applebloom.:applecry:
Also not the one who made Rainbow dash deserve a horrible, gruesome, painful, tororous death.

What the hay...? :rainbowhuh: Tracking!

This somehow reminds me of HL² City 17.... :derpytongue2:

Moar please :rainbowwild:

More. Now. I loved the prequel to this, but now I need more. Quickly. Or I'll die of deponyzation.

Rocket to Insanity: Dawn of a Dying Madcunt

Save Rainbow Dash from her pain.... through death.
Rocket to Insanity: Dawn of a dying Madcunt

Okay,even though everybody else is saying that they want Dash to die, I think that she should actually live....just saying, having her be dead won't fix any of the ponies problems, but having her alive will!
:pinkiehappy:

Tracking dude:moustache:

:yay: IT'S FINALLY UP! :pinkiehappy:

Oh god this is good, more! Beautifully written and interesting plot line :pinkiehappy:

Give it a sad and dark ending, but I wouldn't like it if it was completely sad and dark. I think it should be bittersweet.

Tracking this! Twilight, you must save Rainbow Dash! :fluttershysad:

if your gonna kill of dashie, let her kill herself, she deservs better than prison, or being killed. leave my poor dashie alone :rainbowderp:

I think u guys should check out my secondary story. It's based on this, and I got neighbors consent to write it. So far, I think it has been a successful endeavor, and I think you guys might like it.

I'm so, so sorry...but I can't help my inner grammar nazi from showing itself.

"Your welcome, Twilight."

Now, I know that you didn't edit this, but my inner grammar nazi/troll got out. I call him grammar troll. He isn't nice in the least. Sorry, again.

Either way, this is a piece of art. I love the storyline, and that's what's important. Great work, neighbor.

Nah

Awesome! I really liked the ending to this chapter too! :yay:
You have my applause! *clap clap clap*


Woo-hoo first:pinkiehappy:
Great so far

Wow:eeyup:
This just went beyond of just being insane:pinkiecrazy:
wonder how twilight is going to help RD

I might be a good editor...I work from my iPad, so I have spell check on my side.

Oh, nice work on the new chapter! I'm enveloped in mystery! The chapter is too, but me, mostly. It's so mysterious that It's enveloping me as well. Awesome job, neighbor!:pinkiehappy:

Oh, nice avatar, by the way. That custom?

449681 1. Dont worry, the editing side of things is sorted. 2. Yes, the logo is custom. I made it using photoshop.

Well, it's pretty cool! Nice work on all that, guvnor!

All though, it's probably best that I'm not an editor...I also have shoddy Apple Internet conection on my side, next to auto correct. You know, once I was writing in my notes, and I put down Rainbow Dash, but I forgot the space in between. So I went on before I could fix it, and it replaced it with samaflange. I don't even know what the heck that is! And now, when I type that word down, it tells me it's wrong and that there aren't even any replacements for it. I swear, Apple hates me.

Ok, I looked it up. Its apparently spelled "samoflange". It's a Thundercats reference. Apparently the crew at apple likes to mess with people's heads using Thundercats references. A sad, sad day for technology...

Give Rainbow a death as painful stabbed by 1000 red hot needles.

my god this story is juicy! i need moar!

Comment posted by Monochromation deleted Dec 30th, 2013

Neighbor, that was awesome. I'm surprised that Rainbow wasn't using any kind of weapon. Not criticizing, though. The wolf pack was a good idea. Pretty cool.

453895 I fourth, fifth, and sixth that:pinkiecrazy:

Comment posted by Monochromation deleted Dec 30th, 2013

452708 technically, she already has been. Or at least, burnt by a barn.

Ive been waiting so long for a fic where fluttershy is killed. THANK YOU, KIND SIR.
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oh shit son this keeps geting better and better cant wait for the next one keep up the good work

give the monster a fate worse than cupcakes.

Rarity...Rariteeee!? HAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!! She had it COMING!!! Heheheh...hehehehe...!

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My thoughts exactly

Oh no, rarity is dead....................eh i dont care:ajbemused:

NOOOO!!! RAINBOW!!! :raritycry: Twilight, you must hurry! :fluttercry:

:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: N-n-n-n-ooooo! Not Fluttershy, please live! :raritycry: Twilight, If your crazy scheme works, do it quickly so we can get the real Rainbow Dash back! :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:

Guess you can say:
Rarity's death...Wasn't a pretty sight.
or
Diamonds AREN'T a girl's best friend.
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