• Member Since 26th Feb, 2012
  • offline last seen Oct 22nd, 2013


usen the power of ponies to change the world woooooooo


Deruc is living an average life in Fillydelphia when he gets an unexpected letter that will change his life forever.

Gonna be a short one, but I'm hoping it will open up the door to a longer story down the road.

*cough* comments would be nice, even the mean ones....

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 6 )

I thought it was good so far

It was alright:ajbemused:

449149 appreciate the feedback, I'm not the best when it comes to writing so I wasn't expecting it to be that good

449183 Okay, well It was good, just seemed to move to fast I'll probably watch you just to see if you can get a :yay: from me.

I really like the story and wish it would continue and not just be a one shot

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