Deruc is living an average life in Fillydelphia when he gets an unexpected letter that will change his life forever.
Gonna be a short one, but I'm hoping it will open up the door to a longer story down the road.
*cough* comments would be nice, even the mean ones....
One word: D'AWWWWWWWW
I thought it was good so far
It was alright
449149 appreciate the feedback, I'm not the best when it comes to writing so I wasn't expecting it to be that good
449183 Okay, well It was good, just seemed to move to fast I'll probably watch you just to see if you can get a from me.
I really like the story and wish it would continue and not just be a one shot