• Member Since 24th Jun, 2014
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Lightning Splash


Hi everypony, I'm a young pegasister who likes to read and write mlp fanfics, also I am very careful with what I favorite. I hope you like my stories and I would appreciate if you would follow me.

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Equestria has gone dark, no pony knows why, save a purple one.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 19 )

How would the world survive a thousand years with no sun? It'd drop to space-cold pretty quick.

You certainly piqued my interest.
I shall be watching this.

4604818
Idk, it's equestria. I'll probably write that in and give it an excuse.

This has great potential.
Keep it going and tweaking it, your story will go far.

4604843 Sometimes these things don't need explanations. If you can find a way to turn this excuse into an important part of the story, then by all means go ahead. But if it's going to take time and not going to contribute to the overall story then I wouldn't even bother.
By the by, this is a pretty cool story you got here :D It's a bit darker than your last one!

4604843 That's called 'handwaving'. It's not something that good writers do. Everything has to have a reason, an explanation. Everything.

4604877
Thanks for the advice, i actually kind of like this one better than my last story. Speaking of which, have you read chapter 7? Anyway, thank you for all the good advice and encouragement. :twilightsmile:

4604994 You're welcome!! And I agree, it's fun to write dark stories sometimes :D And I definitely read chapter 7. I thought it was a nice twist you had there with Trenderhoof!

Chrysalis is start to make me mad.

4608405
Well she is the bad guy. Your supposed to hate her, I hope that doesn't mean you don't like the story though:twilightsheepish:

4608411 :rainbowhuh: What? No. I like the story. But....How in the heck is Chrysalis getting stronger?!

4608415
Well when she fed off Discord's love (For Fluttershy, obviously) she also fed on his power. Like when Shining Armour's magic grew weak and died after being fed off on. Also she gaining power from the other ponies she sucked dry. (I kind of got the idea from 'daughter of discord', though in that story there is a better explanation.):pinkiehappy:

4608438 :applejackunsure: Ah. I see. That makes sense.

Ah, I love changelings and their abilities :D

Man! Everyone that I have talked to recently has had serious writers block lately (so have I D: ) It must be an epidemic XD

4730838 let's hope so! I want to get back to writing!

Idea- RD and AJ'S spirits could come fight with Flutter, Pinkie, and Twi.:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::ajsmug::fluttershyouch::rainbowkiss::raritystarry::eeyup:

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