• Member Since 23rd May, 2013
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SpaceCommie


Writer. Editor. Spaceman.

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This story is a sequel to The Pinkie Paradox


You don't have to read Paradox to enjoy this story, but it would be helpful.

Uh, hi, I guess. I’m Ditzy. You can call me Derpy though, it’s fine.

I guess I kinda got the idea for this thing—diary? Is this a diary? Anyways, I got the idea when my friend Pinkie Pie dropped off that book to my hospital room. Oh, I was in the hospital for a while. I probably should have mentioned that. I don’t remember a ton of it though, ‘cause I kinda got knocked out. Anyways, l'm trying to figure all of this stuff out.

Diane Pie, I'm going to find out what happened to you.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

This has been the first time in a long while that I have felt giddy for a new story, especially a sequel.

Wait didn't you take this off the site?

Diane!

Derpy seems a bit bittersweet, when it comes to her mental acuity. Well, I don't know how to phrase it... Like she's a broken toy and knows it?

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And hopefully better than ever!
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I'll try not to disappoint. :twilightsmile:
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:heart:
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Not yet.

For Derpy, this is a great start, but does she REALLY want the answers?

While school is important, I'm in the camp that looks forward to this story's continuation.
See you later, SpaceCommie. :ajsmug:

This story has so much promise, and I love the concept! You've written so well for it already, and I really hope you come off hiatus soon!

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I'm not on hiatus, exactly (work is ongoing, slowly, on my other stories), but this story is. I have some notion of where I intend to take the plot, but there's a piece missing from the story and I don't know where or what it is.

By the way, I'm glad you liked Paradox so much.

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Rereading this, I've come to the conclusion that I love Derpy in this - although how it fits into her now-canon characterization I've no idea - and would like to do more with the story. I'll try to get some drafts done if I have spare time in the next week or two.

6406354 Well you did an awesome job on both these stories! ^_^
I get that 'not sure where to take the story' feeling. I get it a lot.
And I'm looking forwards to when it does get updated! ^_^

Is this story dead? I hope not

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