Clara is a sweet, young girl. She's barely old enough to be separated from her mother. One night during her routine to sleep, she finds something odd with her mirror.
Suddenly, she's been teleported to a land of ponies. And now all she wants to do is go back home to her mother and everything familiar to her. But it's not as simple as stepping back through the glass.
My attempt at a HiE fic. I'm taking it as a challenge to write a good story in this genre.
Cover Art belongs to MurphyLaw4Me
I would like to point out that this takes place between Magic Duel and Twilight's Kingdom.
Please, feel free to comment and review!
Chapters (11)
This is really cute!
I'm interested in how Clara's parents will react.
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Oh, thank you! I'm glad you're liking it so far.
Wow! So many people are liking it so far.
I'd love to hear any thoughts anyone might have!
This is really good, keep up the good work
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HfApBz4_XQk&feature=kp
My first thought, upon seeing the title.
I'm not the best to write in English so I'll just leave a word of encouragement. Very good story so far. Curious to see how it evolves. Good luck to you.
this story is great,love it!('
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now I,m a little sad
cant wait for next capter
Oh wow thuscwas nice im sad to see it end will you do a squeal maybe a few years later and clara is a bit older?
That was so sad at the end! I hope the epilogue is as good as the rest of the story.I loved the character development Trixie had, however small, was still good. Will Trixie ever see Clara again?
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That's a lovely ending, though I do wish that we could have seen a little of how Trixie was doing.
Otherwise I would absolutely love a sequel. 
This was an amazing story full of Daw and feels. I need more 
I say yes!
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Haha. Yeah I suppose. I really hit the sequel hook" stronger than the "epilogue", but what are you gonna do, eh?
Don't worry though. When and if I do make the sequel, Trixie will be at the forefront. It wouldn't be a story without her, now would it?
I'd like to read a sequel. That would be awesome.
Doing a sequel hook with an airplane always brings one thing to mind. Airplane crashes seem to be one common way of transporting between dimensions.
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Er.
I'd like to stick straight to the portal theory. I'm not a big fan of "Protagonist dies and ends up in Equestria", since that sort of implies that Equestria is the afterlife as opposed to another dimension entirely. Which is what this story has established.
But to each their own, I suppose.
5017292 Well often enough something grabs them before they actually die so it still works with the portal theory. Of course often enough the portal is the reason for the crash in the first place.
Sequel ? All my yes
NO THAT'S OK REALLY I DIDN'T NEED MY HEART ANYWAY ; ;
Best HiE story I've read. Kudos to you.
Awesome story!
Thank you for writing this.
I haven't yet reached the end, so I don't know what's going to happen, but I think this little girl is going to have a very hard time explaining where she was if she gets back.
Reviewed and Approved for The Goodfic Bin
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Is English not your first language? Because the grammar you use is really weird. Despite that, there's enough here that's good to compel me to keep reading.
I thought Trixie would go through the portal with her. It's not like she has anything left in Equestria.
4615636 Fluttershy stare x 6
5017292 more like this maybe like she comes back or trixie leaving her world to be with her i mean what does she have here anyway
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Was a nice story.