Pinkie Pie is a BIG eater, so what happens when she let's this get the best of her? Injured friends and broken floors, that's what!
I mostly wrote this story as a bit of fun. Having been rejected from Equestria Daily, I'm having trouble finding the will to finish it, but I thought I'd share it here! So read and enjoy!
All comments welcome!
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erm...
okay?
Are you going to finish?
20456 Yeah, eventually. If it's well received, I'll devote my time to it.
I'm just not sure how to end it.
Don't worry though, whatever the ending will be, I plan on making it a happy one!
Hehe, This is silly
I gotta good laugh outta it, not finishing it though, thats a paddlin
20462
Two or three different possible endings?
one where she stays the same, one where it gets worse, and one where she goes back to normal?
Lololololol, Gummi is such a retard.
This is so funny
I can actually imagine Rarity falling in the sweat puddle. 
To quote the great Hank Hill: "Hey, fatty, you are fat!"
A few grammatical issues. RD says "  I don’t Pinkie Pie would be too mad", you forgot the word "think". But RD doesn't really think anyway. Also, a tense issue in the last paragraph, it should be "rang"
Otherwise I'm enjoying the story this far.
I enjoy this story immensely and wish to see it conclude, However I will miss Pudgy Pie.
I'm going to read this eventually, because it's relevant to my interests.
Oh sweet Celestia I could do nothing but squee in delight as you described how fat she was getting. XDDD *blush and facehoof*
Also, Derpy/Ditzy/Mad-Muffin is a brilliant side point to the story. =P
Why do I get the feeling the other horseshoe is about to drop?
Also, my own personal message to Pinkie: I think you look FREAKING AWESOME as fat as you are, it's just health issues to worry about. That's all. *dives into her gut, snuggling and murring*
OK ... fatness not so cute anymore. I'm rooting for Pinkie to get healthy. Not THIN thin, but healthy. XD
Bawwwwww, why so long with no update? Is it pretty much dead now? :(
21000 hmmm gummi with red hyper realistic eyes
yeah no thanks iv shit my pants enough for one night
thanks alot urban legends
21000 he is the slender gator
885107 fucking diabites risk
1210409 Hence, fantasy. It shouldn't be taken too seriously.
I do hope you finish this.
885107 Let me use my magic, then no health problems.
I think I got a pretty good idea on why Pinkie Pie is still fat but I won’t spoil it for you all.
SweartothefuckenBran, is this topic so sensitive that it takes to be, lemmesee, EIGHT chapters??
I screwed up big time.
Lol.
Mad Muffin... Derpy?
Posted two years ago...wow!
Dude Gummi don't got teeth, that's why his name is Gummi - Because of his gums
4628738 But he doesn't know that. That's the point
885107 Ok that's just a tad weird