A late night in the library for Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. A single misplaced blue feather.
After a compromising rumor begins circling Ponyville, Twilight and Dash leave town to avoid dealing with it head-on. But these rumors can't be true, can they? And why is everyone acting so strange?
Author's note: I hate this thing. I've been tortured by the act of writing it for like three years. It's been through about six complete re-writes, three name changes, several format changes, relocations, and once or twice, a font change for no real reason. Somewhere in my brain was a good idea for a story when I began, and I'm pretty sure that I have writing talent somewhere inside there too. But every time I put my fingers to my keyboard, I liked what I saw coming out less and less. I'm tired of revising it over and over and over again every time I come back to it. So I'm just going to upload what I have and move on with my life.
Three years in development? Damn, I totally get how difficult it is to write something you can be happy with but I hope your work pays off.
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Yeah, it's more or less been taunting me since summer of 2011. Every time I got to a place where I was kind of happy with what I had written, I would stop for a few months, and the next time I read over it I would just detest every word I saw. Ugh.
4595642 yeah, it sucks when that happens, but in a way it's a good thing since you really have to over what you've written with a fine comb until you think you can work with it and people will like it and from what I've seen so far, I think it's pretty good.
One thing I would say though, make sure that two character aren't speaking in the same paragraph, I noticed a lot of that in the previous chapter, really easy to fix though.
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Yeah, I've had problems with formatting dialogue for as long as I've been writing. it's getting better all the ti-i-ime