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Draconaquest


And now it's time for one last bow, like all your other selves. Eleven's hour is over now. The clock is striking twelve's.

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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves 2


After returning to Ponyville with Twilight, The Doctor has a vision about something strange in the Crystal Empire, and takes Rose and Twilight there to investigate. But during his investigation, he finds out that he wasn't the only Time-Lord to survive the Time War. When the Crystal Empire is turned upside down, The Doctor, Rose, Twilight and Princess Cadance, must face the Doctor's worst enemy. Who seems to know about The Doctor's future.

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Comment posted by Draconaquest deleted Aug 5th, 2014

Draconaquest did you forget to mark this story as complete now

5314003 Yep, I did. Thanks for reminding me! Also, I like your profile pic!

5315160 your welcome and ok :pinkiesmile:

Should the Doctor be telling Luna that he's from the future? Wouldn't that cause a paradox? And Cadence, wouldn't seeing her also cause a paradox?

5318719 Not necessarily. Just because, Luna knows he's from the future can't cause a paradox. If that was the case every time The Doctor took his companion into the past a paradox would be created. Also, seeing Cadence was inevitable, so it would not make sense to create a paradox. And, it also gives Celestia a reason to create another alicorn. Besides, that last thing I need is to add yet another plot twist to make this story longer. Trust me, I spent 5 months just trying to figure out the story for this, making notes on Word. Either way, a paradox wouldn't be caused.

Or if you know the voice of The Master from the modern doctor who series you could use his voice too...

5326167 He's not John Simm's Master. John Simm was a basic template. I designed him to be more like Moriarty because he was more clever than The Master.

John Simm? Nah, I'd prefer Mark Hildreth, probably a good Master voice, since he played Lotor in Voltron Force.

"Oh big, big mistake, really huge." The Doctor began. The Master began to back up "Didn't anyone ever tell you there's one thing you never put in a trap, if you're smart, if you value your continued existence, if you have any plans about seeing tomorrow, there's one thing you never, ever put in a trap!" "And what might that be?" The Master asked. The Doctor looked straight into the Master's eyes, anger burning in his own. "Me." The Doctor whipped out his Sonic Screwdriver, and used it on the control panel. A series of sparks and sizzle came from it.

Nice Time of the Angels/Flesh and Stone reference! :twilightsmile:

"I prefer bananas. Bananas are cool." The Doctor said

Almost as cool as Fez's and bow ties.

The Doctor poked his head out the doors of the TARDIS. "Two things: first of all, when I shout now, start producing as much magic as you can muster. Also, find a forth alicorn princess." The Doctor ran back in, and started to prepare the wrecked TARDIS. It wasn't easy with a half-exploded console.

Twilicorn.

6285554 That line is a reference to the 10th Doctor line "Always bring a banana to a party." Which was said in The Girl in the Fireplace.

6285572 Correct!
And, now we know why Celestia took on people as her apprentices.

6630641 That was the reference.

Oh, big, big mistake, really huge." The Doctor began. The Master began to back up. "Didn't anyone ever tell you there's one thing you never put in a trap, if you're smart, if you value your continued existence, if you have any plans about seeing tomorrow, there's one thing you never, ever put in a trap!"

"And what might that be?" The Master asked.

The Doctor looked straight into The Master's eyes, anger burning in his own. "Me." The Doctor whipped out his sonic screwdriver, and used it on the control panel. A series of sparks and sizzle came from it.

Oh, hell yes.

That song is annoying!

The TARDIS ‘core’ in the middle of the control panel

You mean the time roater?:facehoof:

“What do you mean?” Rose asked.

"If I told you about

"Besides the past is much more interesting," The Doctor said, "You get to see things first hoof instead of just hearing about it."

Wait, is HE coming, is THE MASTER coming into play.

Red to Pete Capaldi already! Noice.

Old raving scotsman.

Wait white water! Cadence clone on the surface! Wow Missy you have gotten clever

The master is starting 5o yet......predictable

Why would doc who say straight up he's from the future

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