After an accident left Fleetfoot's flightsuit ripped open she is in danger of being kicked to the bench for the duration of the season.
Fortunately there is somepony nearby who can fix it.
To bad they never told her that pony happens to be a cute mare.
Special thanks to Kirb for the idea and helping me with my grammar and overall readabilty of the story.
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Coco X Fleetfoot... you have my attention
Hey, thanks for crediting me in the description!
I can't wait for further chapters.
I'm always up for a little Coco.
Well, this is interesting.
The way this is written, the first person narration, I think it could improve. Fleetfoot narrating everything while adding a few thoughts, that kind of confuses me.
Is there going to be more?
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But there are going to be atleast 2 chapters more.
Yup, there is going to be more.
But I'm a slow writer
Ahem...
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I know I know, i'll try and finish up the chapter I'm working on but I disliked it due it felt like a bit ooc-ish (more then usual) and rushed
WELL. How did I just find this story?
Well, nevertheless, I love it! Umm... moar?
Really Spitfire
?
Totally
! Coco is just so adorable its ridiculous
!
Well...you are a Wonderbolt
?
Anypony that Coco is offering to 'roll in the hay' with, would have to be an idiot to decline
!
Way to go Fleety
!