THIS APPEARED *AS* I CLICKED THE FAVOURITES BUTTON

1881643 I AM A SORCERER AND A TELEPATH.

This was truly AMAZING!!! As per usual with this story.

1881651 Wait, I clicked it as it appeared... Wouldn't it be me who is?

1881657 I'm calling shenanigans, you posted your comment no less than 10 seconds after I did, and it's a 17,000 word chapter.

1881665 No, it is me, in my sorcerninjapathy, who knew that you were JUST about to click Favorites and posted it JUST as you clicked!

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1881673 Yes.

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The last part makes me wonder what will happen in the end.

Interesting backstory.

......... Rainbows make me cry......YOU GENIUS!

“Plus, he never comments on Pyro being a pervert when he can't be found.

I think you meant Spy, not Pyro.

Also, whos Jack?

1881689 I second this.
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Hm... thinking about it, this story could explain why the blues arent in Mann Vs machine.

This new chapter put me in a good mood today. =)

1881782 Noted and fixed. Thanks.
Also, Jack is...

...someone who shall appear later.

I totally saw the Jarate coming a long time ago. I was not disappointed. Also, have you thought of submitting this story to Equestria Daily? I'm pretty sure that you would be accepted.

1881818 I tried. It wasn't.

NEW CHAPTER **SPAZ**

1881819 really? You'd think a story of this quality and popularity would be accepted.

1881837 I submitted it when it had just one chapter. The violence was off-putting, they said, and I made the accents too thick.
I decided to just not bother trying and focus on getting the story out.

1881848 I guess I can see the violence doing that, but personally I like the accents how they are.

Oh I just love this story so much. How well you combine the elements from MLP, TF2, and now Doctor Who, this is officially my mos favorite fanfiction of all time. I can't wait for more, also, could I get a link to the tumblr you mentioned at the beginning, I haven't been able to find it.

1881819 That sucks, but ah well. You have this, and it's awesome.
And Finally! The question will be answered!

Maybe.

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KnightMysterio's Library

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1881848 EqD has a history of refusing to read stories simply because they don't feel like it and pulling reasons out of their asses as to why they won't accept.

Not your fault.

Suddenly, this video:

Sounds horrible.

1881858 I can see a lot of reasons why this story isn't accepted. aside from "we are picky fan fiction nazi's)

#1 it's interesting but all the blending of the story (tf2 doctor who mlp SOTB slenderman) wayyyyy too much blending.

#2 it's kinda stale it has no suspense we already know the ending before it happens they can't "Lose" no matter what happens.

#3 so much non cannon it hurts.

Well... so Slendermane feeds off of misery? That... makes a frightening amount of sense.
Wohoo! Yes, that was finally the Doctor. Now I admit to some curiosity about what happened to Sparkler. On the other hand, the Doctor making a mistake does account for a lot, especially when he admits it was his screw up.
So Sombra was just another pawn for Slendermane? That also makes a frightening amount of sense.
And Soldier is the first to really admit he doesn't want to leave. I sense future plot twists in the future.
Finally, I just hope you are prepared for the whole 'QUESTION THAT MUST NEVER BE ANSWERED' thing. I really doubt that it would ever truly be answered on the show...

The Silence dies when the question is answered...

Also, this chapter was cool. Who knew Derpy could be so compassionate? This also seemed more of a Doctor Who episode with how witty the Doctor was throughout the chapter.

YEEEES
YEEEES

Jack would be an interesting addition to this madhouse of a team.

1882067 I do have to agree with the mass of blending, there's a lot of non-cannon mixed in and it can get confusing. However, on the no suspense part, I'll have to disagree. The Oddessy wasn't boring even though you were told the ending at the start. It's the journey and not the destination.

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That image was simultaneously awesome and disturbing.

I was thinking medic/twilight fusion in this chapter, but at least Heavy has his Element now.

The Soldier-Changeling sneered. “You're a doctor. A healer. What can you do to me?”
“Famous last words,” Pyro muttered.

Couldn't agree more.
I see why you take some time to post due to the fact that you put a great amount of detail with some subtlety.
And for the authors note, I see why.........damn that got to me, nice choice of names for the heavy, and scout. The worst moments they had did hit me in the feels and it hurt bad.
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This is one of my favourite fics on this website.
Keep up the good work

“I have an idea on how to shock Spy out of her control.”

I instantly thought of Jarate. Disappointment did not come.

Also, yay on Heavy getting his dark element of kindness, but I was kind of expecting Ze Spy/Spycora to make her debut. Speaking of the BLU spy, I'd love to see something like this for Ze Spy/Spycora's debut.

Wow that was quite a fight. I guess you apologized in advance for the jarate description right?

Also now I wonder if Saxton Hale is going to appear at all in this fic, I can just imagine him screaming in an alicorn voice "SAXTON HALE!" /

You do a damn good job making reasons for all their character quirks and ambiguity. Kinda reminds me of why I liked Fallout Equestria, which is probably the most popular crossover there ever was. So good on ya.

Yes! New chapter! This made my day!
MOAR!!!

I'm surprised that with Jack in the ponyverse that he isn't the element of love...

who the hell is jack?

Ya know, it's kinda hard for an enemy to appear menacing when you realize it's name sounds like "King SOMBRERO"

i loved snipers jarate it was the funniest part.
i still think they should have gone with medics idea and just beaten the mother loving fuck out of the entire hive and not leave anything alive.

So, what part was I supposed to hate? There were a few parts where I was like 'Woah, really? that's dark!' but that's about it.

I just wonder... Could the Demoman's memory happen? If I remember well, Demo was living in a villa with his mother on the War! update comic. Therefore his mother couldn't get killed before he became proffesional demoman working for BLU/RED.
Correct me if I got something wrong.

1884022 There's a bit of a convoluted backstory for Demoman involving adopted parents. The current version as I understand it is that he was living with adopted parents until the explosion that killed them, after which his real parents took him in. Note my use of 'contact his REAL pare' in Dollag's dialogue.

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Thanks for explaining.

1882134 let me rephrase it's lost it's suspense Particularly after they found the snooze river underground. now it's just your generic beat the boss get a new element thing.

What if I told you that your story, KM, gave me the impetus to write my own fic?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/64696/the-ponyteers

I find it hilarious how all my TF2 and Pony comrades laugh when I speak of a crossover, and then I link them to this...and they refuse to read it because, and I quote at least 5 separate people here, "...no"

So much for Love and Tolerance XD