Everypony else already has their wings, so why doesn't Pinkie Pie have hers?
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Is this an AU where Pinkie is the princess instead of Twilight?
That poor moon got cut off every single time.
I'm confused.
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Or it be could about how every other alicorn story, five out of the six gets to become alicorns but not Pinkie.
Bravo!
4592066 okay
You really got that dream to seem like a dream!
The more I read it, the more it sounded like something I would dream.
Simply brilliant!
Very good. It gives off clues that it's a dream, but at the same time it hides on how this is an alt universe.
If put in another way, its really about how she has become isolated and lonely after becoming an alicorn. So much so she feels isolated even from her friends....
Why did Mr. and Mrs. Cake not want the cake on the ground?
Because it was beneath them!
Heh, it was a nice story. Poor Pinkie.
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You know why Pinkie's reflection only brushed the left side of her face? Because she wasn't all-right.
And Thanks.
Great I absolutely loved it. But the ending was confusing to me.
Ha
My biggest problem with this story here is you couldn't seem to decide whether you wanted it to be funny or serious. Every time the seriousness and sadness started building up, something silly happened and sort of took me out of the experience.
Sadness and comedy can overlap, but there will always be more of one than the other, and mixing them at all is in itself extremely difficult to do well.
I....liked the concept, but the ending was a bit confusing to me.
With the AU tag, and with that description, I guess I expected something different. Makes me want to write my own story with that kind of AU....
This reminds me of the Twilight Zone episode "The Midnight Sun."
I don't get how people are confused by the ending? It's really plain and obvious.
She's lonely because she's the only one that's not like everyone else. She feels isolated because of who she's become.