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The Third Street Saints have fought many different types of enemies:street gangs, international syndicates, terrorists, even aliens, but when the Boss is transported to Equestria, they will face an entirely new challenge:
Walking on four hooves.
The Boss will join up with the Mane Six to take down the gangs that have taken over Equestria, and return the crown to Princess Celestia.

The Boss in this will be addressed in "They" because the Boss is what YOU want them to look like.

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Not bad.
Tread lightly though.
Saints Row fics are among the hardest crossovers around, what with their solid canon establishment and everything.

A couple of things though, send Johnny, Pierce, Shaundi and you might be able to get away with CID.
Bossicorn a a compensation for the power armour at the end of SR4.
And Gat hould be an Earth Pony only slightly bigger than Mac.

Prologue: When The Saints Come Marching In

Nice :rainbowdetermined2:

4602336 I was planning on making Gat a pegasus so he can help Rainbow Dash, who reminds me a LOT of him, in taking over the Wonderbolts.
Of course, she'll say,"Why them?" Earning a nice big,"Fuck you say?" From the Boss.
Aah, the classics. Thanks for the tips though, and for CID I figured he'd be one of the ones staying behind to take care of everything. He knows more about Zinyak's ships than anyone...So, thanks again.

4602856 If you humanised ANY pegaus, they would not be able to take a shotgun to the knee and still stab the cockbite who did it.
Gat created the 'to the knee' joke before it even WAS a joke.

4602856 Also, include a moment where the boss says 'Like a boss', followed by Pierce saying, 'But you ARE the boss.'
Pierce, because he's the only one whiney enough to actually bother to point that out.

4602913 True, just RD's arrogant attitude, and loyalty reminds of Johnny, except Johnny is way cooler! And I'll get that "like a boss" in there somehow...My biggest want for CID, however is to find pony guns that Zinyak randomly has.
If he has Jane Austen alive in that ship, he's gotta have something that ponies can use for a gun.
AJ has to have something other than bucking.

I think the italics broke around... Here. The rest of the chapter is in italics.

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Hope you enjoyed, remember to rate the chapter, comment the chapter, and follow or favorite if you want to see chapters similar to this one, see ya.

Bye, Cr1TiKaL.

Anyway, it has got potential - Some minor overlooked spelling issues here and there, but the idea is solid. I liked how you kept the Boss neutral, and the gangs are surprisingly original in their execution.

4604309 You got the Cr1tikal reference!:yay: and I didn't notice the Italics break. Thank you.

4603123 Endurance. The ability to take a hit and keep on going. The same reason I think Gat should be an Earth pony, Pierce should be a Pegasus and Shaundi... You could pretty much do whatever with Shaundi.

4603123 Dragon! Shaundi hould be a dragon! Gat can call her a literal psycho-dragon-lady.

4604913 I feel that after Johnny's return, Shaundi would definitely mellow out a lot. I guess as a dragon she could light her own bongs now.:rainbowlaugh: But, as for Gat, there are spells that let Earth Ponies walk on clouds, so it could work. I just feel that Gat being RD's mentor and the Boss teaching Fluttershy from being this :fluttershyouch: to :flutterrage: are two points I want to fall into.

4604929 The boss would only be able to aggravate Flutters into rage.
Don't lie to youself, you and I both know I'm right.

4604954 Touche. But I'm intending on the Boss relating with her, what with the Boss originally being even shyer than she is, what with originally being a mute, and taking her under their wing,(literally) and taking her from shy to cold and cruel.
MAKIN' THE ELEMENTS OF DISHARMONY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4604965 So bossicorn is a go?
Also, there' nothing to say that the aggravation issn't what the Boss uses as the trigger to bring out Hatershy.

Comment posted by rikusorasephiroth deleted Jun 27th, 2014

4604965 And in typical SR madness, how about Hatershy is Flutterbat?

4604997 Good idea, could make Trixie's gang a little more threatening with an ace in the hole,:trixieshiftleft:
Bossicorn was a go the second I thought this through, they've done way too much to not be an alicorn.

Took down 3 gangs,
got blown up
wakes up from 5 year coma like nothing happened
Takes three more down, and Ultor
Teams up with Ultor, becomes celebrity,
Takes down 3 more, and Stag
Defeats Terrorists
Becomes President
Defeats aliens
Leader of galaxy
HOW COULDN'T THEY BE?

4605011 What's with the second 'Takes down 3 more'?
That one should be, 'took down an international criminal organisation'

4605029 I always wondered why Syndicate branches from other countries didn't ship on in there to take it back. Loren was dead though, so maybe the "International" meant they had Frenchies (BELGIANS!!!!), Brits, and Mexican-americans.

4605034 More likely after taking down Killbane, the woman that was left, I forget her name, took control and integrated the remaining Syndicate into the Sints franchise.

4605102 Viola? Perhaps. As for the Saints Row wackiness, yeah it's going to be there, but I put the dark rating up there for a reason. I want some deeper parts, such as the corruption of the elements of harmony, and such. But onto funner things, the weapons I'm planning on fit on ponies like a saddle, and unfold to be machine guns, or pistols, whatever, attached to metal arms, which shoot them. They react to thought, because Zinyak had the power to make something like that, and because any other explanation would be too long. I thought voice-activation, but that would get bad.
"Shoot. Stop. Aim at that guy. Shoot. Stop." Would get old fast.

Only have one problem with this: I generally don't like stories where the author uses "they" when talking about a single character. It would've been better to have the beginning like that of the other SR games where The Boss is in a suit of some sort that makes his/her's sex unknown. Then, before the second chapter, you could make a post on the story asking what they want him/her look like. Then you could choose what you like or the most similarities of each comment to make the character. You could go with my suggestion or just ignore it. Also, you got Kinzie down to a K.

4606966 I don't like stories like that either, but it lets the Boss be anybody's Boss. I kept calling the Boss "him" while writing this and had to go over it like three times to make sure I kept it "them." I sure there's still something. Thanks for the review though!

4607352 No problem, besides with what I suggested it literally does make The Boss everyone's Boss, just an idea from a fan of the SR series.

I was looking for a story like this and i found it!!!! Awesome story, hope to ser more

I love this story love it so much don't stop writing please

will we be seeing any of the saints or just the boss and ponies? and by saints i dont mean just the importent figures i mean the grunts too like you see on the sidewalk of a controlled territory

4696109 the grunts are going to be Ponyville citizens.
There's enough clones of them to be fine.
And Johnny, Pierce, and Johnny are coming.

Yay flutterbat and also really good I'm loving this so glad I stumbled upon it:pinkiehappy:

this is so gonna go awesome, Saint Style!!! :pinkiehappy:

"Um...Mister, are you okay? It's raining, and when I saw the light, I thought you were struck by lightening. But when you got up, I realized that you're alive..."It said in a meek voice, approaching him slowly.

so the boss is a guy? meh i guess people can mentally change it

"So you're royalty?"

why does fluttershy even ask that is the boss a alicorn?

4763050 I see the Boss as my Boss, so I usually make mistakes like that. If I didn't check my writing, there would be way more.

4695924
Yeah, i played all day, n drank all night cuz im in saints row trick.

4790677 So How many Genkis you killed in SR the Third?

4793087
I dunno 3? I dont play the thirf much but when i do its usually on my legit 100% complete maxed out guy that ends up destroying the police force with his bare hands. But i think i killed three total across all my saves damed things are going extinct youd be suprised at how much thier fur alone is worth.

4793237 Yeah, but they're hard bastards to kill, so I wouldn't be too worried.
Their teeth make great decoration for hats though.

4793475
Oh they arnt to hard when your invincible to every thing but melee damage, or have a tank or VTOL, stag must be hunting em to support thier military funds since the thimg have more hralth than brutes but i suppose it was worth it for those ginki costumes.

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