This is a collection of short stories, all of them FoE related, but most representing failures on my part to pull off a decent plot. I do not have any plans for the pieces here; I present them only for those few interested.
Also, a warning. Strangely, I have no interest in editing my own work, despite editing so many others. These are most unedited, representing unfinished work.
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I'm watching you...
And I faved... And I tracked...
And here's my comment:
FIRST!!!
kk. had to get that outta my system. So. You're going down the path of connecting the past (The ministries era) to the future (Stable Dweller/Puppysmiles/Security era). This should be interesting, to say the least. If you want to keep it completely on track with what they main characters in all the other fics are going through, either you or them wold have to work around what the other typed into this glorious fantasy world. If you can get the right balance, this could definitely come to be an amazing link to the others. I can't wait to see what this Zebra's life was like!
Here goes the over-Arching official comment!
Everyone, communication is key whenever the internet is involved, since without facial interaction some meanings can get lost. So I want to be very very clear here, so that everyone understand EXACTLY how I work.
Writers! I borrow heavily from many other fanfic works in this series. If you feel your content has been misused or would simply prefer that it be excluded, you need only shoot me a message to get things fixed. My intention is never insult your work; by drawing from it, I actually mean to praise the valuable addition of your work to the Fallout Equestria world. Similarly, if you would like to have your work included, please message me and i will read your work and consider its value to this story.
Readers! Understand that this work isn't written by Kkat, Somber, or mimezinga. It is not perfect, awesome, or even good in every case. Please enjoy it for its good aspects and if it is not of a quality where you can enjoy it, quit reading! I won't feel bad at all; I know how many great fanfics there are out there waiting for you!
Reviewers! Thank you so much for giving me some objective insights. While clicking the review button may be helpful for your fellow MLPfictionites, it is not as good as posting your feelings! Anything you post is helpful (and I realize I'm inviting trolling), whether negative or positive, and while I may not follow your advice, I am still grateful for your continued help. Seriously, tell me why I deserve that 1 or 5, whichever it may be!
Editors! I am a bit of a picky wordcrafter. I will occasionally Capitalize things out of turn for emphasis and place commas because of a verbal pause. You don't need to worry about informing me in these two areas since I have rather specific interests into their workings. Grammar, Spelling, and other punctuation are great things to help on though! and I appreciate posts containing suggested changes!
Comment-ers! Thank you for you additions to the ongoing discussion of this work! Understand that I may delete your comments over time, especially old comments, short comments, and those relating to errors/corrections I have finished making. Please don't be offended, this just means you may comment more, and about newer topics!
Covering the past events that took place before Kkat's fic and Somber's the war era is a monumental task and I wish you luck. I'll definitely be tracking your story.
Confound these ponies... they drive me to give you comments.
I enjoy seeing this side of Spike, We might not see him all the time, and now we know what he does every now and then.
I didn't see many mistakes, and those I did see weren't that bad, just a pause where I didn't expect it or something like that. The grammar and spelling are impeccable, and I congratulate you on that. *Pat on Back*
Good Premise/Prologue, I gotta say that I'm wanting to know if this is how all the orbs get to places where the main characters from the other fics find them. That would actually be a pretty interesting concept, and I'm sure that my hammer blow was close to the nail, but far off enough that I won't be infringing any copyrights.
It is early, and I understand that to give too much away would ruin the story, but something's irking me: This ghoul comes back every now and again - roundabout every twenty years or so, I gathered - and each time, he dumps all his memories into orbs, and then Spike just teleports them randomly all over the Equestrian wastes? Why not keep them in his cave? Or was my above thought about the mains from other fics finding the orbs more spot-on then I thought? 
If you are able to answer these questions without spoiling the story, then do so as you see fit. If not, then I'm glad to put this thought into the mind of every reader to read my comment, because now they'll want to know the information as much as I do, and therefore, They'll READ!!!!! 
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHahahaha.... ugh... erm... *clears throat* *awkward silence* 
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5/5 stars, and dammit, this is intriguing!
Back pats!
As for the memory orbs, most of the orbs found by the other ponys were likily there for less magical reasons. I haven't talked to any other author about this particular idea, so it is by no mean the ONLY way to spread them out (although it would explain some of the more random finds). Most characters would want to collect them and keep them safe in a single place, but Eternity's case is a bit different. Spike uses his sending magic to spread them out as a way to circumvent the mysterious curse (AKA important plot point will not be spoiled early!).
Also, to address your earlier post, while I plan to connect the two eras, no single pony can account for everything. Much of the intervening time will be shown through the Shorts and memory orbs, rather than a dedicated storyline. (Although I do have a massive timeline of Eternity's movements and iterations sketched out).
Surprisingly perhaps, I don't see stepping on other author's toes to be too much of a problem. The Waste's may have an Iron law, but within their landscape chaos is a norm. Towns appear and disappear, pony's go to find food and return 30 years later. Despite the massive changes put in motion by Littlepip's return, the wasteland was by no means stagnate previously. As long as I keep a close eye on Broken Hoof, everything should mesh without much incident. Not to mention I'm willing to redo anything that is too problematic (since I recognize that this story is a fanfic of much greater works, which should not have to bend to my scanty ideas on plot).
First short story is planned out, but I haven't started writing yet, so probably a few days to go. If I gave up on editting the wiki I could write more, but the wiki needs me. I'm only 10% into adding Heroes content and Project Horizons is going slowly (not to mention Pink Eyes). meh, we'll see. Thanks again for reading!
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No worries! And I understand about the whole "not gonna try to step on their toes, but if I do, oh well" Shtick. Y'see, me and a friend started making a fic together, and he was gonna make it into a comic, but he's still not as good at ponies as he'd like to be. Here's one of his latest:
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Pretty good, right? He's decided that the comic might happen, but first he's gonna upload it here as a fic, and since I helped, I' putting one up at the same time - and seeing as how they are going to correlate, we're going to really need to know what the other's doing. But, enough about me. I understand that great works take time, and I respect the fact that you're even taking time off the wiki to subject yourself to our callous and fickle tastes. Good luck with all your conquests!
For some reason a cold shiver keeps running down my spine every time they say present. I keep expecting something to go horribly wrong.
Cant wait to see what happens next. Oh! I was planing to name a pony in chapter 4 Cog but more as in a piece of a machine and not Cognizance.
this particular sort story is set 5 years after the great war, so you can assume all of it's characters are dead. so reuse names at will! :)
Can't wait for update! Error seems to have an innate gift.
Ah, and a dash of Borderlands if I'm not mistaken.
Yep. It wasn't entirely planned, but I went with it. I'm working on a Double Crossover, FoE meets Borderlands, which should start posting soon. I lot of the material here is being recycled for it. Hope nopony minds
Just as a heads up friend, if you were talking about the massacre that was part of the FoE universe's Great War, then the name was actually Littlehorn and not Littlehoof. I know this because I'm making a reference to the massacre in my FoE side story somewhere down the road. Just thought I'd let you know. Cheers.
Ouch... thank you. I feel like my FoE writer rights have taken a gut punch. I really should know canon better than that.
Also, I canceled this because I wanted to stop posting failures... and I notice that isn't happening.
Due to the recent stat update, I've found out that some pony is still reading this!
Whoever you are, I'd like to know you! Say something in the comments!