Evans is a 21 year old man who lived a normal life, after his family's death he has changed for the worst not to mention that he hates MLP, one day a ship crashed near his location to find two equines inside the ship. Will the magic of friendship triumph against Evans's endless cycle of hate?
My (Failed) attempt for an HiE story but, with less cliches as possible and yes I know it sucks I just wanted to see how much it sucks.
P.S: The Image has nothing to do with the story, I couldn't find a better one. Also this is not a self-insert it feels like it 'cause it's First Person.
Chapters (1)
In the end, all stories are self inserts.
WOW! This was... so much better than my story I told you about in the chat Blazer. I like it better than My Little Lyra
Meh.
*insert Smokey and The Bandit troll quote here*
Honestly, I didn't even read it, but It seems like a good concept.
457255 Trolling as usual I see.
i thought it was good, very good. I thought it was a very interestingly good change on the whole HiE thing, please make more chapters. I enjoy it! Evens is looking to be in a lot of trouble, i wonder what is going to happen next?
457288 Hint:
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Imagine that but with Evans puching Rainbow in the face instead.
hmmm, interesting. I will have to see what you come up with
457550 IF I can get some help otherwise the fic is doomed.
457266 You'll see I'm not your usual troll. My jokes don't take away from the story, as much as get a cheap laugh out of people. My childhood sucks, so I dedicate my time on the internet to make people laugh, just like Pinkie!
Come on, Blazer!
Just grab another one of your awsome ideas and work it out!
Your story isn't so bad after all.
475391 No one wants to read this or any of my works and my ideas are horrible, so it's all useless.
This always helps when writing.
1. make a plot outline using these 8 methods.
-Story gaol: the overall plot of what you want to happen in the fic
-Consiquences: what happens if the gaol isn't reached
-Requirments: the steps leading to the gaol
-Forwarnings: The steps leading to the consiquences
-Costs: what the main charicter has to give up to reach his gaol
-Dividens:Rewords made for each requirment reached
Prerquisites:Steps leading to a Requirment
-Preconditions:The steps that lead to a forewarning
Once you have all this...
2. Make a small paragraph about the overall plot you just made and then reading it over decide on how you want the fic to end.
Hope it helps. It's allot of work but it's worth it.
702004 I'll do what I can but, as I said earlier: this will be my last fanfic.
702018 Next time PM me an outline, I'll then see what I can do to help.
702031 I'll PM you a sample of the fic.
That was amazing.
Thank you.
823293 Too bad you won't see more of this fic or it's remake.