Twilight Sparkle has heard the story of Nightmare Moon since she was a filly. But as the thousand year anniversary of Celestia's victory arrives, Twilight discovers something that challenges everything she has ever known... and this night will be a night long remembered...
Inaugural Story of Nightfall Equestria Tales.
Story: Spoiler Alert NET TwiIight Sparkle SauronLead Co-Writer: theblondeknight
Lead Co-writer: Spoiler Alert NET TwiIight Sparkle
PS: I do not own the cover art. I'm not even sure where I got it.
Chapters (3)
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
If you have any recommendation/comments/criticism, feel free to bring it up. I'm open to any help I can get at improving this story.
it's ok, seems a bit rushed though. Maybe try having more emotion in your characters instead of them stating simple things like, "What?" Cause they are a little flat.
Another problem, Celestia seems attached to her ...'s
Other than that, you did a pretty good job writing this
4922547 Okay, more emotion. Got it.
Celestia is attached to her what?
Thanks.