This story is inspired by Blackwing's "Griffin the Griffin" and Io's "The Blue Stranger, The Red Curtain"
Lets follow Kane through his adventures through Equestria!
There will be no sex even though there is a sex tag. Its there for descriptions of bodies and for innuendo.
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Good Job on your first chapter! Looking foreword to the next chapter.
4568063 Thanks dude! You don't know how much it means to me to get positive feedback!
Thanks to everyone who favorited the story I'll work on the next chapter ASAP!
mmmm I'll follow and here is a smile for you ------------>. :) you know what I'll add in 2 more for you :) :)
I assume this is your first story. Oh wait, that was stupid. It's obviously your first story. The thing is, you keep up the good work. Maybe if you are lucky, another story will pop up as well, with the same good writing. Keep up the good work!
Just... try to be careful with the whole, huge initial paragraph. It may not look like it, but sometimes readers may get a little bored to read so many sentences together. Try giving each given paragraph (or at least separate parts of the same paragraph) more space to each other. Just a little advice, kay?
4568830 Alright! Thanks for the advice.
Well... this is awkward.
4569982 Yeah.... Maybe a little weird...
Love the story so far I hope you make more of it.
4582390 Working on two chapters right now! expect the mto be out either at like 2:00 or in the morning.
Good story so far
Also do not rush yourself. We do need chapters every week.
4667653 Sorry for not posting! I've been really busy with being in my friends quince and I'm hardly home so I can't really work on any chapters! I'll make the next one at least 5,000 words!
4679776 sorry that was type o we do not need chapters every week
..................MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Is this story dead? Please tell me its not
Does he not realise that in a way that's racist. When you say any pony that just says to the ponies I want your attention, no other species. It's the same thing as everydragon, everyGryphon, and everyhippogriff, meaning that they identify their own species not other species when calling for attention.
However everybody, and everyone bypasses this racism by not specifying the species.
I know that they do this for a bunch of other words, but if you have been transported to another world/universe/place you might as well keep to something that isn't technically racist.
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Besides that the rest of the story is going well, and I am enjoying it as such I will stay. It's just that whenever you find it you get annoyed by that little tick, Which everyone seems to either A misses or B ignores.
Because when you think about it you figure it out, there's more than one species on equus. And they say their own way so technically the ponies and the other races are racist to each other. Afterall they go with something like everypony in everyminotaur.