"No. No. No. NO! I CANT be in love with Discord!" shouted Rainbow out loud to herself. She sat down on the ground behind the door of her cloud castle. Her eyes were wide, her mane was a mess, and she was breathing heavily. She didn't know what to do next.
I thought I was the only one who shipped Rainbow Dash and Discord. I think they make such a cute couple. :D
Lol I don't see it :p
4582510 Normally I love AppleDash, but I thought this would be fun to write
Woah, plummeting to her death? Like *that?*
Lemme remind you, Dash is the best flyer out there! Pretty sure she would have caught herself and remembered to flap.
This is a good concept, but you rush it waaay too much!!!! Slow the pace down, yeah? Don't rush, you will get what you want written in good time, don't worry!!! If you add more details, like surroundings, feeling, sensory details, it will slow the pace down appropriately, and make it easier for the reader.
Ya feel me? :)
4582596 Yes She just kind of like shut down because Discord being in Ponyville for a whole weekend is like her worst nightmare
i thank that rainbow dash and discord wold be a funny and cute couple but i thank flutter shy is better for discord
4582743 Me too I just thought this would be interesting and fun to write
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hmm could this be a scootadop 2, i love it tho
4584177 thanks
Well.... okay.
MIND. BLOWN. oh when oh when oh when is the next chapter coming? I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!
4730843 Really?! Thanx no one has ever said that to me before Im working on the next chapter now YOU JUST MADE MY DAY
4737757 ur welcome!Its just what I do. P.S. in the place where I live,technically, I just made your night! P.P.S. YAY!!!! THIS IS GONNA BE SOOOO AWESOME!!!you can rarely find any good DashCord fanfics anymore.so thankful I found this.
4737843 NEW CHAPTER UP AND STORY IS COMPLETE!!!!!
4748272 OMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH THANK YOU SO VERY VERY MUCH I AM LOOKING FOWARD TO READING THE SEQUEL
4748908 No problem Just saying it might not be as good
4748908 I'm glad you're excited
This was a nice story
Oh were both mlplover
4837796 Thank you That's cool
Really good. I am looking foreword for the sequel.
4911352 I'm glad. I'm writing it now.
you sold do a continuation of this story XD
5023590 I had one but I deleted it
5023590 in working on other great stories, so keep your eyes peeled
Nice I love this so farM da shy and Discord?! Nice!
AMAZING
5603325 Thanks
4582596 Yeah this is where I stopped reading... This story needs SOOO much more detail that it is not even funny! And the hole... "Oh no Discords spending the weekend with fluttershy!" Is not going to make her pass out and fall to her death... This is just very weak story telling to me...
I must say it was good but I think it was a bit rushed I'm so sorry if I'm being rude but please slow down the pace. And for all of you out there DASH PASSED OUT she didn't just stop flapping she passed out jeez pay more attention.
Right the FUCK out of nowhere!!! this is like an older Disney movie.
still, it´s adorable :GuysWeNeedADiscordEmoticon:
window. They saw them watch A Fault in Our Stars and kiss each other.
I´m goin g to kill you and them I´m going to throw you to the mirror pond so I can kill all of your clones