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Coat and Arms are two pegasi brothers that come from a family tradition of serving in Canterlot's Royal Guard. Just their luck, they were picked for the first watch as personal bodyguards for Princess Celestia herself. Can Coat and Arms make it through their first day without making total mules out of themselves or will they be banished to the moon before they even make it to their post?

Special Thinks to Bronypower for posting on Youtube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k98jirdZmcs&feature=plcp&context=C49320d2VDvjVQa1PpcFOWt-XCj7pwidxn4QyhABQLhfVbr-wiLKY%3D

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Hm, i enjoyed it. Good job.

A few spelling mistakes here and there but overall pretty good. I did laugh quite a bit at it too, so goal accomplished.
Also loved the Trollestia at the end there.:trollestia:

Read and uploaded to my youtube channel. Enjoy the free endorsement XD

433988

Thanks for posting my fiction and good job on Coat and Arms' voices, they sound exactly as I imagined them.
Too bad I completely revamped Arms on the extended fiction I'm working on. I made him out to be more of a jerk and he sounds a bit like Ray Liotta. If you want to give the full story a shot, it should be up by the end of the month at the latest.

434134 i might do that, and i'm glad i did the voices right =P i was just doing like i normally do and throwing in a random voice that i thought suited them =3

437077
Just about finished. I took the South Park: Bigger Longer and Uncut approach to the extended version. I literally rewrote chapters several times because I felt it wasn't random enough... rinsed... and repeated. Expect banana jokes, trolling, and poison joke being "consumed." Coat and Arms never had a chance.

472064 sounds good... but a little off my normal genre

473219
It's all good, someone out there is bound to like it. If not, it was fun to write at the very least. But I need to hurry up and finish it. I just had about 8 good ideas hit me over the head.
*Edit*
Cancelled the project thanks to the Royal Wedding shattering my story's central plot. But Coat and Arms will appear in my other stories.

fantastic, sometimes it seems like there are not nearly enough good celestia fics. you got me laughing pretty good especially at the end:trollestia::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

949999
Thanks for the interest. If you want more of Coat and Arms, they have a minor cameo in "Inappropriate." I plan to put them in other stories too. A friend gave me an idea for a meta where a bunch of off duty castle guards are gathered around discussing who's best pony.

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