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Chaotic Dreams


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In a sequel to "Princess," the reborn young alicorn mare Rainbow Dash must save her family from the hands--yes, hands, not hooves--of a race thought long extinct. If she doesn't, not only will the royal family be killed by advanced technology that can destroy even the immortal alicorns, but this race will exploit the power of the alicorns and Doctor Whooves' TARDIS to take over all space and time.

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Comments ( 25 )

Oh, huzzah! The sequel has arrived! :pinkiehappy:

This is already so intense, and it's only the first chapter! Please, continue to blow me away. *sits happily*

I'm sorta tired how most mlp stories portray all humans as evil but will tracked this one so hopefuly see if it there is good humans in this.

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Rest assured, not all humans will be evil. Far, far from it.

YOU'RE MAKING A SEQUEL TO PRINCESS?!?!?! :pinkiegasp:

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I am so glad I watch you.
Tracked. Now...

I GO. :coolphoto:

You...made a sequel? :derpyderp1:
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:pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightsmile::yay::rainbowkiss:

Time to read!

Sequal.... :raritystarry: It is very good. I just wish it had a different name, like "Princess: Blah blah blah..." and the blah would have something to do with humans or something. I love it so far. It's very intriguing. Great Job!

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A wild sequel to an amazing story appeared!

What will Fluttershy511 do?

Fluttershy511 used read!

Sequel is stunned!

Sequel used don't update for a long time!

It's super effective!

Fluttershy511 fainted

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I must say, that's one of the most creative comments I've seen.

CDR

Horrendously Horrid Hell achieved!

Righteous Royal Rage Rampage activated!

Copious Curbstomp Crushing imminent!

THEIR DEFENSES ARE BROKEN! LET THE SLAUGHTER BEGIN!

Are they humans or Timelords? (Never watched any Doctor Who before incarnations 9, 10, & 11)

425465 And this... this I'm very glad to see.

Can't wait for more!

575328 What happened to the updating?

What no update???

1509643 1952636 The story is a lie! ignore and forget! it will never update! :pinkiesad2: :raritycry: :raritydespair: :fluttercry: :applecry: :ajsleepy:

2182958 It was posted '7th of April, 2012' Which in a month and a half, will be a full year with no updates! while other stories by this author have updated a lot sooner and quicker. Basically, the Author has ignored this story to work on others. Such as Millennium Wake, Fallout Equestria: False Notions, Good Intentions, and AfterLife. All of which have updated in the last month and a half.

2183105 huh he must have run put of ideas, oh well :twilightsmile::raritywink:

575328 why did you cancel the story? :fluttercry:I'm just wondering, the first one was really good, so is this chapter. I was really looking forward to this story until I saw it was cancelled.

I just spent an entire night reading Princess. It's now 1:46 AM, an I find the sequel isn't even going to update? Why do you do this? It might not be as popular as your others, but that's no excuse to not finish what you started.

I await your response, Chaotic Dreams...

i was going to read this but it not even going to update 10 secs. laters faintes

Noooooo!!!!! Why do all the good stories end up cancelled?!?!?!?! This is a crime against Fimfiction as a whole!

673182 that there last bit of your comment was a line from the transformers 1986 animated movie

CDR

7514856 *takes a bow*

7515175 thank you my friend here is my all time personal quote from the transformers animated movie. (clears throat) PREPARE FOR EXTERMINATION.

A forgotten tale, abandoned and adrift in the depths of time.

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