Hearing about his liking of Tf2 Buttons mother buys him a whole set of figurines of the nine Mercenarys, a wayward spell brings them to life, cute Hijinks insue proving that even a small world,...is a dangerous one.
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was born, which was cool, then stuff got weird
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Your grammar is...
Atrocious.
4548330 oh,..ok didn't think it was that bad this run around, but i don't know anything about grammer so i"ll take your word for it
i really need to stop writing.
Con: Grammer...
Pro: Pretty interesting story...
4548345 Well, surely you know enough about grammar to NOT skip words.
What? Twilight was Celestia?Did you mean to say "her student?"
Also, don't capitalize random words.
And Spy is OOC.
Interesting concept though.
4548375 well thanks ummm just asking is there a consistant grammr mistake i did over and over again? just so i can learn to avoid it in future chapters
i'll also try get in touch with my editer.
4548391
It's everywhere and I'm not a good editor. Sorry. Regardless, here's the first part:
“Ya know, Princess Celestia said you were no longer her ____ anymore, that should insinuate that you would study less,” Spike said to a Bedraggled Twilight.
Twilight turned, revealing her saggy eyes and a crooked smile,
“Are You KIDDING!! Look that the size of this library! this Crystal castle has everything!!” Twilight mused.
“I havent seen you leave this place it a week, what do you eat?”
Twilight seemed confused by the question.
“And this place is an absolute mess,”
Twilight looked over the library in awe, she had been so engrossed in her recent study that she had needed her natural organized nature.
“I left a tea tray up here, did you even drink that? and if you did where did you,...”
Spike was cut off when his eyes met a jar of Suspicious yellow liquid rolling freely among the book covered floor.
Spike looked accusingly up at Twilight, He picked up the jar and stuck it into Twilights muzzle.
“If this,... is what i think it is,....we have a problem,...euugh its still warm”
Twilight blushed slightly and donned a face of innocent shame, she shook her head and took Spike in a hoof, the jar thankfully landed on a discarded throw pillow.
“But Spike! you have know idea of the gravity of this situation! I Have spend this entire week on a single spell!”
“I Single SPELL!? you’re the princess of magic!! what spell could you possibly be working on!!?”
“Its a come to life spell,”
‘A come to life spell? I hate to bust your bubble Twilight, but you mastered that spell when you were six,”
“No,no,no,no,no! this spell is different! it will make what ever effects it fully alive! Able to think! feel! to move all on its own,.. it was said that this spell created the first pony out of stone!”
“Wow, okay thats amazing,..but you still have to get ahold of yourself,”
“I will Spike, but first,...we have to test it,”
4548385 okay that one was my straight up stupitity
4548464 thank this is very helpful
4548676
No prob.
More....
4548943 wow, ive never had anyone ask for more before, i must be growing as a writer
i'll have to brush up on my editing
4549036
I don't care it's 1:30 a.m, we still need more. 
Strong 'Small Soldiers' vibe but carry on I want to see how this develops.
Carry on
4549491 yeah i loved that movie as a kid so natually theres gonna be a few refrences,.. but i won't rely on them
hey I had this idea where the tf2 characters possessed the mane 6, derpy, zecora, big mac
that was one of my idea and could anybody do that
just uh little idea for people to try
This is gunna be awesome. It's like his fillyfriend Sweetie Belle shows up for the party wearing a blue party hat while Button is also wearing one.. This will be too funny!
this is amazing!
may gaben bless you with a burning team captain.
4549036 what? NEVER?!? My good man(?) please, allow me to get on my hands and knees and beg you for more, for this story deserves it.
i had this one idea where the mercs end up in the equestria girls universe as teenagers.
yes, a little romance between spy x rarity or scout x rainbow dash, is totally legit!
4843801 and then Button noticing the uncanny resemblance between the video game and his friends, creating the plot line of the fic. Why don't you write that?
6536075 you wound me good sir (or madam).
sigh,.. this fic came at a very inconvenient time in my life. after writing it i became enthralled in other fics ( i have 3 unfinished fics,,...the pressure!) also i have fallen out of writing temporarily due to depression. im out of the funk now but y life still has a few adjustments that need to happen before i started writing.
long story short, i have little inspiration left for this fic, HOWEVER, i just can't bring myself to but a cancelled tag on it. so this fic is in a deep DEEP hiatus.
but HEY! maybe someday, throw it into your faves and forget all about it and maybe,.....you'll be pleasantly surprised.
... *reads comments* ...how do I say I want more chapter without saying it?
... OH! I know! *clicks tracking tag*