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DuskPhoenix


"If I can't be accurate, then I'm sure as hell gonna be extra." -BDG

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I don't know how long I have been here. I don't know how much longer I shall stay.

I am waiting for someone important to me, someone who will take me far away. I don't know where they will take me, but it doesn't matter. Because then, I won't be alone anymore.

Many thanks to BloodLord, who made this story so much better than I dreamed it could be. Ge check out his stuff, he's pretty awesome.

Written for the Most Dangerous Game Contest.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 13 )

Into Madness

What is your chapter doing inside of me?

4606429 Wow, I think that joke physically hurt me. :derpytongue2:

Thank you for the favorite! :twilightsmile:

Five likes and one view?

HACKS! BURN THE WITCH!

4606449 I know, I'm just magic I guess.

I seriously don't know how that happened. I know I gave someone the password a few weeks ago. :applejackunsure: Maybe the counter isn't updating? It shows 9 views on the graph.




"And why do witches burn?"

"... 'cause they're made of wood?"

"Precisely!"

:rainbowwild:

Wow. :rainbowderp: Just wow.

4616203 I'm glad it had an impact. :twilightsmile: I thought that if I was going to do a story about an alicorn, I should explain why there are only two (four by ascension) alicorns in the show. It came out a little bit darker than my original plans for it were. :twilightsheepish:

Loved the ending, but the scenes with the alicorn before that (so, the majority of the story) just lacked punch. I'm not sure what it was—maybe you could have played up the isolation and madness further? As it stands, everything just seems kind of confused.

4661271 Hmm. Thank you for your feedback, and I'm sorry it wasn't very engaging. I'll re-look over it and try to figure out how to make it better. :twilightsmile:

Sunny #9 · Jul 21st, 2014 · · 1 ·

I'm opposite in loving the ending. I found it interesting what was before, but 'They aren't really there anymore' is...untrue. Our protagonist showed that there was something there, and shattered as it may be, it might be possible to put it back together. If I were in Celestia's hooves - if that were my child - it wouldn't matter if it would take another thousand years to coax her back. It'd be worth the time.

Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I've put together an audio version on YouTube.

5190122 Wow, no I don't mind at all. Thank you very much, it's awesome! :twilightsmile:

listened to scribbler's reading and...

wow.

I... feel... empty for celestia

I just found this...I hate you.


Very well done, Phoenix!!!

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