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BloodyDitzy


Just tryna get my ideas out there

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Octavia went to the clubs whenever Vinyl was performing, but Vinyl always forgot to show up to Octavia's performances. Finally Octavia had enough.

That night however, Vinyl had a rough night. The kind she had before Octavia entered her life. What Octavia doesn't know it that Vinyl needs her more than she thinks.

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Comments ( 8 )

Huh, no comments? That's strange.
Nice story! I felt the feels. You got me to cry, so that's good. Normally stories like this start with the break up (or falling out, 'cause they're only friends in this one) and you see the immediate reaction (i.e. Vinyl going out and getting drunk) but here you have the tail end of her depression, which is refreshing. (I don't want to read 101 ways to write that Vinyl's at a bar and the kind bartender stops serving her and calls her a cab (wow, that happens a lot))

So yeah, in conclusion, I loved this story! Maybe in the future you can write a sequel that goes in depth about how they get together and stuff.

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I'm glad you like it.:twilightsmile:
A friend of mine committed suicide by jumping off of the roof of my high school. He shipped Vinyl x Octavia, so I decided to post this in his honor.

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Aww, I'm sorry to hear about your friend. It's nice of you to write this for him.

Haven't read it yet already crying while putting bullets In the gun:fluttercry:::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch::raritycry::raritydespair:

Short and to the point. It's good. :twilightsmile: Sad, horribly sad :fluttercry: but it turned out good in the end.

Though it was short, this was very well written. Very, very sad, but a great story still :pinkiesad2:

In the words of ILoveKimPossibleAlot on youtube, "All the feels.":fluttercry:

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