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LightOfTriumph
Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. 
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This is really cool, can't wait for the next chapter :)
Nice job. Cant wait for next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter
4560829 Yay! You like it! Good!
I like that armor. I want that armor. Where can I get it?
4562243 Standard issue military hardware, you'd have to enlist.
4562329 [youtube=www.youtube.com/watch?v=DAwzrjFvYik]
Good start. Although it should be 'our flanks."
But what about Discord and the "Rainbow Power" from the chest? You might want to touch on those in the next chapter.
Good things come out of breaking the rules.
Electric Eye. Why does that sound familiar? Oh yeah! You were gonna use that as your username. Great chapter! I'm glad to see it updated.
For some reason I simply love this line.
SAVE THYSELF A PENNY FOR THE FERRYMAN!!!
Well, this got interesting. Although in this sentence, '...know what we're using...' shouldn't it be 'they're using?' And you misspelled Equestria.
One of the hazards of doing your own proofreading. In my case, I can't turn it off.
4749385 Did you like the Fic? This is more my usual stuff...
4749393 Oh, indeed I do. It shows much promise and potential!
However, it seems to be lacking a certain je ne sais quoi.
Now all you have to do is finish Aer Vis.
5906128 I may delete this and restart.
And here I thought you wouldn't self-insert.
Is that a reference to...
You smug son of a bitch.
5906136 You can't do that. I love it so far!
5906244 But I don't, that's the thing.
5906255 If you're gonna go through with it, at least start the chapters from scratch. Deleting the entire story and reposting it would create way more work than necessary.