Engineer, Brony, Aspiring Author. Not necessarily in that order.
My name is Cloud Walker, and I should still be a pegasus. I didn’t become the youngest mayor in Cloudsdale history just so I could grow a horn and get exiled to Canterlot Castle. Why am I an alicorn? What am I going to do?
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Great story! I'd love to see a sequel.
This is actually really cute! The writing feels rather rushed but honestly I can't point to any other flaw that might make the story unenjoyable. I'd love to see how Princess Walker starts to settle into her role. After all, it's easy to say she can go and be among the common ponies, but actually doing so is a whole other story, especially considering how they'd probably treat her.
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. Hammering this out in time to meet the contest deadline wasn't easy. I haven't given much thought to a sequel, partly because I have other stuff I want to write first. Who knows 
Thanks and, in all fairness, it was a bit rushed
one error. Cadance WAS a pegasus to.
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I had to do a bit of digging to unearth the source of that. Twilight Sparkle and the Crystal Heart Spell, right? For the purposes of this story I'm willing to overlook those novels as being canon, although it did make for an interesting bit of pony lore (honestly I think that was my favorite part if the whole novel).
Yes, you're right though. After the contest is over I might change a line or two to account for it. Good catch.
4623940 easy mistake.
Very nicely done. A little fast-paced, but I'm pleased to see a decently-executed inversion of one of the contest prompts. :)
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Thanks
I was working two other stories when I started this one, finding time for all three was... interesting.
That was absolutely amazing. Short, sadly. I hope there will be a sequel of some kind...
Ah that was perfect.
I do feel that there could be more.
BUT what more could there BE.
This short is just so good ugh.
Everything that you wrote was excellent.
You can has review!
hmmm
What did she do to earn ascension?