• Member Since 23rd May, 2013
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TheGradualGhost


Needz moar cheescake!

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When Fluttershy finds an unconscious pony in the Everfree Forest she knows she has to help him. She doesn't expect him to awaken and have no knowledge of talking ponies. Even more confusing is his claim that she is in danger for helping him. What does this pony know and why does he refuse to share his knowledge? Could Discord help to get him talking?

Inspired by my own Dungeons and Dragons characters (who have had a habit of running away from my original intentions in the middle of playtime) and the high fantasy adventure tales those games helped create. Sit tight for a story cloaked in mystery, gearing up for adventure, and the abuse of my lucky-to-be-alive thief.

Cover artwork by LeapingEquine.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 8 )

I like this. Nice intro for your D&D character, good motivation, and love how you handled his cutie-mark. Wonder what will happen when he tries to pick pockets, or locks with hooves.:pinkiehappy:

4564691 only time will tell my friend.

I like it. It has a good flow, not too fast not too slow. You took the time to elaborate. I can see how this will be going but I am still curious so as to the 'important details' but hey, spoilers. :pinkiehappy:

Good story. Good flow, not too fast nor slow. You took the time to elaborate. I like it.

4578602 Glad that I could entertain you.

I will not favorite it yet, but I will be watching this story's progression. It very much intrigues my curiosity. I'm liking what I'm seeing so far.

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