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A non-canon sequel to Labba94's comic series 'Midnight Eclipse'.
On one of the sunniest days in Canterlot history, all seems to be civilised... Until an innocent pony is turned into a montserous maniac, thanks to the many xenophobic citizens of the higher-up class vilifying somepony based upon how they look.
This fic is part of a gift to gift commission.
See the original comic, here: http://labba94.deviantart.com/gallery/42475083/Midnight-Eclipse
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I've read this first chapter! ^_^ Oh my, it's been a wonderful thing to read!
I'm shaking in excitation thinking of the following chapters! I know they'll be great!
I also like how you portrayed Midnight, making her embarassed and having her blush and babble
And this fic also confirms how jerkish the inhabitants of Canterlot can get! But I'm sure, from what I can deduce, that some of them might get what they deserve somewhere in the next parts of this story... ;D
So... I really really enjoyed it! ^_^ Thank you, thank you so much!
Nice work!
And just as how I supposed, this chapter is great! ^_^ Really, the scene in which she disposes of the shop owner by completely squashing her under her hoof was... wow. I doubt my skills in writing would allow me to find a better term to describe that sensation than just "wow". Really, one of the best scenarios I've ever imagined in my head, and it felt so... real: the way you write is as perfect as always and this indeed helps in making the whole thing appear as much realistic as possible.
So... you really deserve all these compliments! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and there's no doubt that it'll be as great as these two have been!
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Thanks, sugar, I'll be sure to add more gruesomeness for the next chapter, with even more ponies.
how can you make a sequel to something that's not even finished yet?.....
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It's a commission, and it's not canon.
4538046 k....
Ahhhh! Another wonderful, wonderful, wonderful chapter!
I've already realized it, all your chapters are amazing and perfectly written... and this one confirms my idea once again! ^_^ It's... flawless! Those drunk ponies, the marvelous crush scenes, and the vore one that I think will take place in the next chapter... wow, it's incredible. One of the best things I've ever read! ^_^
Moreover, I think it's been a very nice touch to use a bigger font size for Midnight's words to stress her huge size after the growth!
So... yay! I'm so hyped for the next chapter! ^^
This story reminds me of a book I read. If I remember correctly, it was called Enormity, by W. G. Marshall.
This is really good can't wait for more
A challenger has appeared...
I wanna see more Vore!
Dis gon b good
*slips on headphones*
T_T
So uh, this question popped into my head...What if M.E. during her rampage, comes across a school full of children? Does she A) have the tiniest sliver of morality to not kill young, innocent lives under her hooves by crashing through the school like a bulldozer, or B) being too far gone in her insanity to not care that she fatally crushed dozens of young, innocent children by chrashing through the school like a bulldozer? Im kinda stuck. I would hope A occurs because of the children having nothing to do with her situation and are not sufficient targets of her ire. However on the other hand, I would also hope for B to occure for interesting plot progression and story telling matter.
The pony in the title picture is Sunset Shimmer, right?
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Nope. That's Midnight, labba's OC
Wait a second...this story...T_T
Is this Attack on Titan.
Without the 3-D maneuver gear.
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No.
I haven't even seen Attack on Titan, therefore I cannot confirm the similarities.
4580891 lol ok I was just joking XD
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I hate jokes, but, in all honesty, my views are biased from not actually watching the film, so I won't criticise you for that.
4581262 ehehe okay then I'm going to leave slowly and never return as I'm not appreciated here. So long.
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That profile image...
4657264 Does it disturb you?
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Maybe...
#CupcakesHD
It's just a chainsaw and a crazy pinkie, Aperture has loads of chainsaws.
But they're not used in testing (super happy about that...)
4657779 Well they really should...chainsaws make WONDERFUL scientific instruments....
4658930 hmm. I'll test them out next chamber I build.
And you two are testing it.
ah man
darn...
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With all due respect: Would you two be ever so kind as to take your chainsaw-fetishes elsewhere?
4659622 I like you. If you want to talk you're welcome to visit my homepage. You just earned yourself a follower.
So it was all a dream huh? Oh well I can live with that I guess