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Belgerum
I write fics just like I play the tuba. I wing it, and hope the fart that comes out sounds at least somewhat right.
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Curious. Lets see where this story goes.
Anyway, I would suggest you try adding in the gryphon kingdom.
Mix it up with changelings if you can.
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Those are some good ideas, and I might go add them if there's enough interest, but right now, I'm just getting started by adding at least one chapter for those listed right now. It'll take some time to get the story actually going, but once it's on it's way, I'll consider adding more places.
I'm rather curious as to what you plan to do with The Amazon Jungle myself.
This looks fun, but I hate reading interactive stories. I know that I will likely be missing some chapter or content, and it pains me.
Other options: Give up hope and get feed yourself to a cragodile.
Frolic in the Poison Joke until the overdose transforms you into a human.
Get consumed by the unholy offspring of the Vashta Nerada and Parasprites and turned to bones in an instant.
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Pfffffft it's almost as if you WANT Octavia to find herself in an awkward predicament.
First one!!!!
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'Kay.
The third one but add a low blow.
I wanna do the third one cause it seems the most likely to make me die!
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Ask, and ye shall receive.
I wanna die!
But seriously, this story is awesome so far.
Screwed? If that means "screwed by manticore" bad ending, I am in.
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This is a definite possibility...
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Thanks. It's mostly just me going off and writing short things for fun, but I'm glad you're enjoying it anyway.
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Are the deaths going to be gory?
because gory deathsex is best deathsex4534191
Not all gruesome fates need to end with death. Nor do they all need to include sex/rape. If the manticore were to lock you up with Vinyl, never to release you again, that could be an ending with neither.
Either way, there is a reason I'm giving the reader the choice between defeated, screwed, and dead here, and currently, the story is not tagged as containing gore. I'm still deciding if I want to involve bloody things in certain endings, but if I do wind up adding gore, it will probably only be for the death options in the story, and not messing with the sex bits, should that turn certain people off. I'm sorry if this disappoints you, but that's the way it is.
Considering Tavi is taking on a MANTICORE by herself here, I'm sorta tempted to make all three of these options all lead to bad endings... But I'm not sure if I want to entirely rule out the possibility that she could win by some miraculous chance...
I still wanna die!
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Since I'm actually trying to decide some things before I tackle the death ending or something, I'm just wondering, would you want gore in the death scene?
4534500 Eh, I wouldn't be against it, but I'm fine either way.
4529767 Stories like these are no fun without plenty of absolutely absurd dead ends.
I hearken back to the days when the very first of these were published. I may even still have them around somewhere.
I believe one of the earliest was a story about a guy shrinking to find a terrorist who'd stolen a device called a quantum reverser, which when activated at the subatomic level would transform matter into antimatter, making it the perfect terrorist weapon.
There were several in that early series and were quite popular.
Alas, I can't remember the titles to any of them, though I can recall the plots perfectly!
4529767 Oh, found it! "Choose Your Own Adventure" series.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_Choose_Your_Own_Adventure_books
We had "Journey Under the Sea", I recall; and I think the one I mentioned was "The Antimatter Formula".
The manticore devours you alive, forcing Vinyl to watch.
And it lets her live, because it can't think of a worse punishment for her than making her bear the memory of the gruesome sight until at last she hangs herself with a piano wire in the basement 4 weeks later.
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I actually do know about the actual book series. I was just making a sarcastic comment on the strange morals of people in charge of someone else's life, and the tendancy to make the wrong choices purposefully.
Due east!
You are screwed.
Adding some more chapters to beginning choices for right now, so we have plenty of options besides just the one line I've been working on. Don't worry though. A bad ending is already in the works, and should be highly entertaining for those of you who love seeing cello pony in bad situations.
*holes
Lsten here, pumpkin head, yer all done
-Sniper
Defeated.
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fixed.
Screwed
I have a mighty need
Again
screwing seems ideal here
East, baby!
Ask around town first!
We've already had enough of charging headlong into things.
See if you can get an audience!
Prince Blueblood's looking shifty
let's check there
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Both "You're screwed" choices will lead to the same chapter, as the situation is pretty much the same for both chapters.
This is also the next chapter I plan to add.
Well, this turned out longer than I expected it to be. Oh well. Hope you guys like seeing the first bad ending of the story! As the story expands, I hope to add more, though perhaps not as long as this one.
she does not need to tell. she need only to find someone to bring there.............. let us see p;onyville has about six very powerful beings more than willing to go head to head wit ha manitocre.
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pffffffft. So very picky...
maybe I'll make an edit or two.
4549332 or make it a sequel. the crystal tree castle gets a manticore throw rug.
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Nah. This is supposed to be a bad ending, resulting because the reader made choices that weren't smart for Tavi. The whole point is to end it badly for her, so I did such.
Made an edit to the final section.
4549342 Vinyl- pricness twilight, I need you help! me and Octavia were kidnapped by changelings in the everfree forest. I am too afraid to head back but I can give you an idea wehre they are.
by lying about what is actually there, she can still gfet help for octy. and since they would come in expecting an army of changelings, she would bring far more than necessary to bring down a manticore.
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I feel like we're overthinking things in a bad ending I made entirely for sexy bits and stuff.
But meh, I guess the ending I wanted for Vinyl does have some holes in theory. I might change it, but then again, I dunno if that would be worth the effort.
I can't wait for 'Investigate the cottage near the Everfree. Maybe somepony there can help you find your way around the Everfree." to be an option.
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I'm trying to gauge which chapters people want me to write next, and try to do them in that order. If enough people want that option, I'll be more likely to make it sooner.
Normally I would go in all gung ho but.... I will actually try to be smart aboubt this. I would ask for the patrons opinion personally.