Just small, quick stories about Lyra and Bon Bon when they were younger. I've been wanting to do this for a while, and I have a lot of ideas. Remember: in most cases, these stories will be completely unedited, and nowhere even near perfect. However, don't let that hinder your enjoyment of the story! Just embrace the cute.
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I have a few more ideas planned for this (not all with them in kindergarten), so I'm keeping it on Incomplete. Hope you enjoy! Criticism is always appreciated!
Chapters (2)
Good start to the story so far! I like the fact that your setting the foundation of where their relationship started (friendship or other wise). Looking forward to seeing more!
You might want to go back and officially and Applejack to the class though, (she kinda just randomly pops up and is with Ms Sharpener.)
Heart... melting... smile... growing... D'AWWWWWW muscles at... capacity... All my thumbs up, take them! And a full five moustaches.
I squeed so hard I now look like the Joker.
And it takes ALOT of adorableness to make me sqee. You, good sir (or madam) have a talent to make something like this. A talent I say!
A TALENT!
Or maybe its just because two of my favorite ponies are now kids, and good friends.
Or maybe it's because my brain refuses to let me sleep, so I am now posing comments about my insomnia.
I have no idea what I'm talking about anymore.
I haven't even read this story yet and I can already tell it's full of d'awww.
Poor Thunderlane, the only colt in a class full of fillies?
Nice story so far, looking forward to more.
ohhh bullies always make my hair stand on end.
The only (minor) problem I had with the story was that you introduced bon bon's classmates one after another, a few lines of text between the introduction of each new pony makes it easier to remember.
All in all a great first chapter to the story, looking forward to more
"Soylent Green is Ponies!"
Wait, wrong movie.
"We could be pets, we could be food, but all we really are is livestock."
Excellent chapter. But man, that was quite a thing for little fillies.
Oh the innocence of youth.
Nice chapter, looking forward to reading more.
Great chapter, and I loved the ending.
Soooooo, long time, no comment or update.