Pinkie Pie is best pony. I'm very new to fics, so bear with me please.
Years of torment and ridicule can do horrible things to a young filly's mind. After being fed up with their classmates, the Cutie Mark Crusaders decide it's time for some justified revenge. They plan to assault their school. But is their assault exactly what it seems to be?
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420609
No offense, but that comment is pretty freaky dude.
It is obvious what is going on from the start, but I just cannot get past the subject matter. I hate to be "that guy", but this just isn't something to joke about.
I knew, I knew for the begining that this was going to have a ending where the guns and bombs were fake. And it was well written to. As for making a real school shooting fic, go ahead if you want to. I'm kind of interested to see what would happen. I'm not heartless or want to do this in real life ok. I just approach all fanfictions with a open mind and read what happens.
DARNIT I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE A SCHOOL SHOOTING.
Quite well written, and kept me captured throughout the entire story. The punishment is a tiny bit too severe though. Maybe a month of detention instead?
I think we all expected a school shooting there.
420708
hate to be that guy, but i don't think that that's the kinda subject that's appropriate to address in a comedy setting. or with ponies.
That was fun read. But why normal water gun? Something more grosse would be better, or airguns. And detention is way too hard.
Even thou I am not fan of gore, dark etc, real school shooting in similar fashion might be interesting to read, especialy if you write somme internal toughts of each of the Crusaders when shooting.
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420609
First off, in a community who's basis is the ideals of love and tolerance, I fail to see how a fic about a schoolhouse massacre would be anything but detrimental, especially considering that there are kids still in school that read these things as well.
That said, aside from the inappropriateness that a fic such as that would have amongst our community, I imagine that a fic such as that would gather a good deal of unwanted attention from certain authorities.
All that aside, the fic was well written for the most part, and I liked the ending
420658 Aww come on, I bet you've thought about shooting up the school a couple of times during highschool.
I thought about going in with a chainsaw and just enter a killing spree-mode murderous rage.
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There is a much worse MLP fics on this site, like Harvest, where the CMC murder Twist for a cutie mark.
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Lol, not new, and I am well aware that there are some sick as fuck fics out there, though there is a difference between the wild imaginings of someone's mind, and something imitatable and controversial such as this. Also, the fact that they exist does not change the fact that they do not help the true message of our community.
Perhaps I am simply an optimist, though I like to believe that the brony community would do better to steer away from fics such as those. Rather, we should embrace those who may consider this IRL, and show them that there is far more to enjoy in life than to seek out revenge in such a manner.
Maybe I've spit my bit, and all y'all are laughing at my naivety, but that's fine, I'll still love and tolerate the shit out of EVERYONE, including those that write all those fics that I steer far away from.
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Your the first member of this first, that I've seen using 'love and tolerance' in a long time.
And I don't anyone is going to read a story about magical ponies shooting each other and think "Thats a good idea, maybe I should do it."
Anyhow, if it were a school shootaout, it would be mauture and not everyone would be able to read it.
"controversial"
Wow, you really must be new.
I mean, I only jioned last November, and I've seen some shit.
Like: The Derpy/Ditzy Scandel, the hearts warming eve shitstorm, the Scootabuse, the fluffy pony abuse, the Flutterabuse, Dinkabuse, Derpabuse.
And a few holocaust fics too.
420609 I was actually the opposite of you. I was pretty much mumbling to myself "Oh...please. Don't do this Fanfiction. It would be too predictable" with the impression that it is was not the shootout but intended to look as if it was going to be. I read the fic to prove myself right =D
421339 I remembered tracking (keyword) to some human/pony centipede adaption somewhere around...
Yeah I knew it wouldn't be homicide but I expected something other than water guns. I don't know what but, like, anything.
It was pretty clear it was not a 'real' shooting ;) No mention of blood anywhere, nor any indications what the weapons are. A good story and a good ending :)
*whispers*
Still I'd like to read a CMC school shooting story as well
/whisper
Great story bro, glad I finally got around to reading it lol. Though I'll probably end up telling you on skype about how I loved it
Either way well written, bravo sir
Dude I knew taht you wouldn't make this a real shooting but when you said dark warm liquid flowing form the victims I started to lose ideas of what else they could be doing. How is water dark?
Anyway this was fun to read non the less. I could use more stories like this. The one big joke story.
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Food coloring?
2144474
That is good.
2144474 Will you turn it into a real assult? I want to see what would happen...