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When the most important thing is robbed from someone, one of two things will happen. They will either fall into despair, or they'll move on. And for one strong willed Apple mare, there's really only one option.
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Well, this was something.
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...Yep....
Nothing like the sound of a guitar for the blues.
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Cause she kept whinging at me to write something "deep"
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Apparently it's not much compared to crappy wordplay.
Yeah but look at it die.
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Eh...whatever....
Aye, but it's a bitter slap to the face when shit does well over this.
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I'm talking about The Flirt
And...
954 followers
15+
(WHERE THE FUCK ALL THE PEOPLES AT!?)
Whelp that was better than anything I'll ever write.
*throws his pencil out the window and lives as a hermit*
I'll promote it later cuz I'm lazy but
you're pretty okay in muh buk
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The American West, home of the Blues...cool funk yo...
Sane Krieg: Good job.
Not-so-sane Krieg: STRIP THE FLESH!
Good job Hat. The only thing I noticed is heroin instead of heroine. AJ isn't a drug...or is she? ;)
I could imagine that being narrated in a bluesy sort of voice. Twas nice and thought-provoking.
that was beautiful. man that beginning was tough to read ;_;
glad she found happiness. very touching story, loved it .
Lovely
Huh. At first, it seemed like an apple-flavored "Dash breaks her wings" story. Then it got good.
Short, but elegantly so. You said what needed to be said. AJ would approve. Thank you for it.
Unrelated question; what the heck is your profile? It looks like a round Italian flag with eyes.
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ITALIAN!?
NEDERLANDS STRONK!!!
ITALIAN CORRUPT!
4597241 Oh yeah. Italian has green in it. Is it actually a flag...person...thing though?
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NEDERLANDS FOOL, THE GREAT DUTCH EMPIRE!
4597255 Ew, Nederlands. Now Sweden, ther's a country for ya!
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Heresy.
4597275 Heh. I'se actually half Swede :3
Sorry for the mini-tangent, this is actually a really beautiful story, just wanted to say that.
Good story, but (and allow me to say anyone that can write a halfway decent story in less than 1500 words has my seal of approval) it could stand, and likely deserves, more embellishment.
*turns on Acme Eyeball Wippers* That was Beautiful man.
there are no words
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Please don't joke about that or you might take yourself seriously.
:)
Damn. I love stories that have a country/bluesy feel, and this one is no exception. Have a fave.