Ponies on earth

by drnachos

Being sent

Celestia sat high atop her throne. Her elegance shining all over Equestria. She has recently been using a spell to peer into the human world. Equestria had not seen the human world since nightmare moon's imprisonment to the moon. Celestia continued to gaze into the portal. She saw a grey skyscape,a city being besieged by a group of humans carrying guns. One of them held a flag high in the air. The flag was blood red,with a white circle in the center,on the white circle a swastika coverd it. Celestia saw the Nazi soldiers singing a song. Smiling with no remorse as they murdered innocent civilians. They sang,

"Auf der Heide blüht ein kleines Blümelein Und das heißt: Erika. Heiß von hunderttausend kleinen Bienelein Wird umschwärmt Erika. Denn ihr Herz ist voller Süßigkeit, Zarter Duft entströmt dem Blütenkleid Auf der Heide blüht ein kleines Blümelein Und das heißt: Erika. In der Heimat wohnt ein kleines Mägdelein Und das heißt: Erika. Dieses Mädel ist mein treues Schätzelein Und mein Glück, Erika. Wenn das Heidekraut rot-lila blüht, Singe ich zum Gruß ihr dieses Lied."

Celestia was bewildered at the sights she saw. These humans had no sense of compassion nor did they know the magic of friendship. She knew a certin group of ponies that could change that.

Twilight sat on top of her chair in the library. She continued to read her book on Celestia knows what. Spike was curled up next to her. Drooling as he thought about Rarity. "Spike can you please stop thinking about rarity? Your getting the chair wet!" Spike frowned. "Sorry twi,you just know how I love her." Twilight rolled her eyes. What was it with that dragon and Rarity? Just as she thought that Spike burped up a letter from the princess. spike then proceeded to read it aloud . . .

"My faithful student,as I gaze into the portal to the land we know as earth I realize in the past thousand years the earth has grown tainted. Tainted by war and lost from the true way. I wish for you and your friends to meet me at Canterlot. Yours Truly,Princess Celestia." Twilight thought for a moment. Earth hasn't been contacted in years! Last thing she knew they were busy fighting each other about some crusade or something. Spike gather up my friends. Were going to Canterlot.

The next day twilight and her friends had arrived in Canterlot. The castle was beautiful as every. Its stained glass windows depicting epic scenes in equestrian history. Celestia smiled at them. "Everpony you must be wondering why I summoned you all here." Pinkie Pie began jumping up and down. "OOh oh I know! Is it a party?" Celestia frowned. "I wish it was dear Pinkie but I'm afraid somepony or i mean somebody needs your help. This planet has been raged by a violent war for many years. Each of you are to be sent to the countries leaders. You will try to make peace talks with them and to restore peace there." Applejack smiled. "You bet we will Celestia,anytin to help somepony we'll do!" The rest shouted "Yeah!" "Then its settled. Off you go my little ponies. I'll be watching over you."

Comments

[FeatherFoot]

Not enough info. Sorry. Make the chapters longer, and by the way, as a pointer, make messages like so:

Dear X,

[message here]

[end greeting here],
Y

Like that. Hopefully it helps.

EDIT: Also, one of the content submission guidelines stated to post content in English. At some points, it can be in a different language, (like in my story, I used dummkopf [or however it's spelled XD]) but not entire lines of a different language. At least make it so we know what they are saying.

[Lonewolf554]

much too short to get into the story. noticed minor spelling errors.

[OoooyVeeeeey]

Your description of the Nazis was VERY incorrect. They didn't just storm into cities killing civilians. They'd usually leave them alone, or occasionally imprison them. The Soviets however often tortured and killed civilians. The majority of Germans and Nazis however had no idea what happened in concentration camps and were told that they would be the rightful rulers of the world, would be looked at as heroes, their horrible economy would become the greatest that ever existed, and were brainwashed from birth with Nazi propaganda while growing up in a country in a worse depression than that of America at the time.

[onsholo]

615793 dude this chapter does not even mention the soviets and BTW the guy is not really wrong the nazi soldiers were murderous fuckers if they epople in germany knew that or not it dosent matter

[poisedanimeBloke]

615793

Your description of the Nazis was VERY incorrect. They didn't just storm into cities killing civilians.

Yes they did.

The majority of Germans and Nazis however had no idea what happened in concentration camps and were told that they would be the rightful rulers of the world, would be looked at as heroes

This is true. But a lot of Nazi soldiers were murderous and vile to civilian populations. The only reason they were not like that in France was because they were ordered to be benevolent.

[HERRKLAUS]

That doesn't describe the Wehrmacht at all. And they weren't all bloodthristy.

But nice job on the accurate lyrics for the Erika lied