And now it's time for one last bow, like all your other selves. Eleven's hour is over now. The clock is striking twelve's.
It's Nightmare Night once again, and Princess Luna is enjoying some time with Twilight. But when Twilight and Celestia, go missing, Luna and the rest of the mane 6 must go on the impossible journey, and Luna must face her worst nightmare.
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I like the style of this story, bu it's rushed. Slow down the pace and put a few scenes in between them. Also, double space your paragraphs as to not create a wall of texts. There's a few typos here and there, but not enough to destroy the story. Oh, and don't upload all the chapters at once, just incase the story doesn't go the way you want it to.
Well, that's all I gotta say.
Thank you for the advice Electric Spark.
I'm new and this was my first story idea. This story just came to me while making Dreamscape. Which as you can see became the cover art. Try Doctor Whooves. I spent more time on it, so it should be a little better. And again, Thank you.
Well that proves even further that Celestia is the suckiest fighter ever
Well that proves even further that Celestia is the suckiest fighter ever
I thought they were heading north, and don't they only have one day? Might want to proof read in the future.
Oh no, no one point out that she was the sole ruler for roughly a thousand years, that'd be too obvious and just make her feel silly.
Sweeeet.