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Princess Twilight is investigating the violent assault on the new weather mare Cloudy Joy after finding her collapsed and bleeding in town. Will Princess Twilight find the perpetrators or will they continue to terrorize the good ponies of Ponyville? What will happen To Cloudy Joy will she find peace and justice?


Warning: Contains mention of "Rape" and mild gore blood and minor Violence
Character tags subject to change and may Get revised

Edited By Don't Look At My Name Bro

Authors Notes
this is my first shot at a story and is my First story so Please Leave a comment and what you think

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Warning: Contains Mention of "Rape" and Mild gore blood and miner Violence

Miner violence? So you're talking about Diamond Dogs? They're the only miners I've seen in the show but I didn't notice them as one of the character types.

That is unless you actually meant "minor" as in "lesser in importance, seriousness, or significance".

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Thank you Corrected it. :twilightsmile:

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Also Char Tags are subject to change as story goes on Atm im looking to have about 4 chapters 5 with prologue Hope you enjoyed the story.

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Honestly I haven't read it yet. That one spelling mistake in the summary as well as the Random Capitalized Words leads me to believe there are going to be much more of the same in the actual story and I'm not really in a masochistic mood right now.

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The story has been Edited By Don't Look At my Name Bro who has gone through the story correcting grammar, and other minor mistakes within the story itself. Don't Look At My Name Bro was recommended to me by Manes who I follow on this sight.

Comment posted by Jake-From-Statefarm deleted Jun 8th, 2014
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