Shortly after Twilight's Kingdom. Twilight Sparkle now rules her own kingdom, but, like always, she is too worried that she might not be a good ruler. Can her friends help Twilight with her problems?
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JusSonic
Hey folks. JusSonic here, finally sending fics here. While I was worried about coming here for some time now, I decided to give this place a shot...as long as you be fair, 'kay?
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You're getting downvotes because of your poor grammar.
Or constant incorrect verb tenses, at least.
you are certainly a good writer my friend but oh my god you need a editor badly ,but still good story
JusSonic, if you're reading this, I just need to say something. I agree with these writers here who are being critical of your work? In a way, they're acting like better friends than the people on your deviantart who blindly follow your every story with nothing but praise. "Good work and refs. Nice job so far" means next to nothing. That reviewer leaves that on nearly every one of your stories, which is a nice gesture, but what does it give you at the end of the day?
Now, I'm not saying that your loyal reviewers are not your friends, but people on FIMfiction seem to be more, well, honest. Although honesty might hurt sometimes, it's really the best policy because this kind of criticism is ultimately more helpful in the long run. If you want to really get praising reviews that mean something, from people who are not just saying something to be nice because they're your friends, then you need to improve yourself.
I've seen that you want to write only for fun, but being able to improve yourself and actually seeing that improvement feels amazing! And honestly, after comparing an earlier story, "Curse of the Demon Pony" with that recent story you wrote about Spike showed that there wasn't much difference. But the thing is, I know you can do better.
Take some time to re-read your stories. Make the tenses consistent. Work on being a little more subtle. Okay? That's my advice.
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Guys, may I be honest? First off, the people on my deviantART friends aren't "Yesmen" or do they blindly follow my stories with praise. They are good friends of mine who I also helped with their own stories from time to time.
As for the "nonsensical crossovers", Solid Sun, they are actually fanmakes, which I enjoy doing as long as I could remember. Yes, you are right in your opinion, and I respect that.
As far as editor goes, I send one chapter to an editor once (can't remember who) but the individual has yet to send it back with the revision...and to be honest, I didn't want to wait.
If any of you guys wishes to revise my chapters or knows someone else outside the folks that I know who could do so, let me know and tell me which stories need revised.
I don't wish to be the bad guy here, I'm doing my best to be reasonable.
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Oh, I look at the link already...and join up...and put my stories in the "Need Editors" forum. Hopefully some people will offer to edit them (I already request some help in editing "Too Many Mane Sixes")