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draygan


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I'm... Not entirely sure how to respond to this. I think it was good, though.

Really. Can't laugh out loud here. But, Really?:facehoof:

I agree with all three comments below mine.

I agree with the four comments below mine...
And add an overdue Da fuq?

I agree with the five comments below mine. :twilightoops:

Sadness :fluttercry:

Whats worse? I came :raritywink:

I don't understand at all about what just happened :rainbowhuh:

Well. You win this round. Thumbs up for you!

I always like strange stories like this. There needs to be more bad end stories. And this one is fun to read! Good job.

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You can't use that emote, she melted.

That was interesting. :rainbowwild:
:rainbowhuh: Why did Luna have a transform spell for that though? :rainbowderp:

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I could tell you, but I won't without the author saying yes. In hindsight, that would have been something to keep in.

The full title of the book Twilight found is "Princess Luna's Perverted Transformation Spells for Spicing Up Your Sex Life."

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And playing pranks on Celestia

Horrible ending but amazing imagery.
thoranother.jpg :flutterrage:

Wow, this was delicius!
And that unhappy ending, I couldn't stop smiling! It is always nice to see stories of this kind, especially with an ending of this caliber...

Okay, I feel bad a little, but the morbidity of this story justfies me! :P

-Zeph

Eh, it's still wincest. Faved and upvoted.

4531742 Then you'd definitely want to check out my other story, What's on the Menu. The first couple of chapters are meh, since I started writing it before getting a bit better at writing, but I promise it will be better.

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Oh boy, here we go! :D

The funny thing is I've read this but I kind of want to see more from this story. Like Twilight getting stuck and turned into different toys for her friends and family. Like maybe a dildo for her mother or something. Maybe some anal beads for somepony else. Just something to keep this going. I mean being melted doesn't mean she's gone for good. I figured Luna would have some kind of safety net to her spells.

Shining armor is a dumbass

4535576 it's also technically rape too

This was a hilarious oneshot. The ending was kind of unexpected considering the clop.

GOOD END

I agree with a lot of the more entertaining comments below mine, I hope you follow 4601564 that kind of plan like this and maybe continue it as one shots

The end ain't even half bad! Nice!

I think this would be one of the most horrible ways to die

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