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Lunar_Star


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Celestia has lived with the guilt of the death of one of her closest friends. She has held onto this guilt through the many years of her long life, even after banishing her sister. But one night everything comes to a head and in her grief, The sun will shed tears for the one she lost.

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Short but to the point. I like it although you may want to look into an editor. Nothing major jumped out just little things here and there but over well done. :moustache:

4496516 I do not rightly know of anyone.

I can always help. I found that all you have to do is ask around here and someone will help you out.

4499231 That will be fine, I do not mind

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